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Mutilatedwonderland
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Venting Via Poem.

Violent distinctions.
Obvious devotion.
Your avoidance,
Oh, darling,
It’s being tracked.
You’re disgusting,
By all the ways,
That I could count.
Cliché thoughts;
Old images running through my mind.
Your repulsive ways;
The way you glance at me,
The way you ask how I am.
Animosity grows.
Envious placement,
On the girl who holds your hand.
I wish nothing on her;
Only you.
Your existence,
It threatens the leniency of life.
How I thrive,
With your bittersweet words,
Without choking on my tongue…
I can’t see the possibility,
So the impossible glares at me;
Right into my chest:
The throbbing veins of my heart.
Diligent patience –
The perfect assassin,
Of my glory days.
The abhorrence of my sanity;
All for you,
For your being.
Waiting for your first move:
The first leap,
The ready spear…
I will be ready,
For the stalemate.
The beautiful clash.
The sinful interaction.
Execration for what you do to me…
What you’ve done to me.
The way you are.
Who you are.
I desire that…
I hate you,
For seldom frowning.
For encouraging my attempts at failed deception…
Because it’s ‘cute’.
What can I possibly say,
That you don’t already know?
I realize what information you hold;
I’m in love with you.

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My current situation and my way of venting without having to say anything that would confuse or frustrate myself.
Enjoy.

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Fire offline Verified User (3 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
An Unknown Location | 2 years, 1 month ago (19 minutes after post)

i like this one more than many ive read.

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Mutilatedwonderland offline Verified User (2 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
Pittsburgh, PA, US | 2 years, 1 month ago (31 minutes after post)

Thank-you. :D

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