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Anyone knowledgeable about music?
I’m taking a Fundamentals of Western Music class this semester. Our midterm was a composition for solo piano, and I really enjoyed it! I was just wondering if anyone would want to read it and comment… You know, what I shouldn’t do or what I could do better, that sort of thing.
I can upload a midi file of the piece, it won’t sound that great but if you want me to, just let me know :D
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Anyone knowledgeable about music?
I’m taking a Fundamentals of Western Music class this semester. Our midterm was a composition for solo piano, and I really enjoyed it! I was just wondering if anyone would want to read it and comment… You know, what I shouldn’t do or what I could do better, that sort of thing.
I can upload a midi file of the piece, it won’t sound that great but if you want me to, just let me know :D
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EDIT: ok i uploaded the midi, http://www.supload.com/sound_confirm....
I’d REALLY appreciate any kind of comments whatsoever…
i uploaded a midi. it’s rather robotic, but what can you do…
Heather: Given It invited 1 user to read this post 2 years ago.
wow thanks o.O
i had to write it all in the space of a few days, i’ve been thinking that the themes are kinda cramped and need more development, idk
oh well that’s because the computer is playing it, not me :P
Nice work appassionata.
The only critique I have is about the staccato rising chords, the G, Am, Bm progression. I think more could be happening there, as it doesn’t seem to fit with the rest of the piece.
Playing around with it on my piano, I’d try playing the first two Gs as is, then trill B to A to B for the second bit, then resolve the measure with the G chord. Something like this:
http://www.marconius.com/variations.mp3
3 variations of the idea to spice it up a little.
lol, whoops.
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Marconius wrote:
The only critique I have is about the staccato rising chords, the G, Am, Bm progression. I think more could be happening there, as it doesn’t seem to fit with the rest of the piece.
I didn’t mean for them to be staccato at all actually, the midi just turned out that way. I wanted more of a swelling, pulsing crescendo… I meant for the rising progression to fit in as a sort of counter to the main theme, which is mostly descending.
Marconius wrote:
I’d try playing the first two Gs as is, then trill B to A to B for the second bit, then resolve the measure with the G chord.
But you’re right that more could be going on, I think the trills are a good idea. That’s actually the one section that my teacher commented on too, so I guess it needs some more development.
Thanks very much :D
just wow?
coming from you, that could be a very bad wow, or a very good wow.
(or maybe it’s just wow because you forgot what else you were going to say, I hear it gets like that as you get older)
el Trent invited 1 user to read this post 2 years ago.
Wow meaning I am so impressed. I love music, but have always been in awe of people who can create it. It seems like the ultimate math game.
WantMore wrote:
It seems like the ultimate math game.
Yeah, that’s one way to put it. Kinda like making artistic math, that’s really fun to listen to. :D
I am a structure junkie, I get excited formatting government documents. We are both geeks.
Though you are a baby geek :-p
Hey kiddo…you disappeared again.
It flows nicely. I especially appreciate all the triplets. :) gotta love triplets. Just out of curiosity, why is there a completely blank line at the end? Is it just a formatting thing…?
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Anyone knowledgeable about music?
I’m taking a Fundamentals of Western Music class this semester. Our midterm was a composition for solo piano, and I really enjoyed it! I was just wondering if anyone would want to read it and comment… You know, what I shouldn’t do or what I could do better, that sort of thing.
I can upload a midi file of the piece, it won’t sound that great but if you want me to, just let me know :D
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EDIT: ok i uploaded the midi, CLICK HERE TO HEAR IT –> http://www.supload.com/sound_confirm....
I’d REALLY appreciate any kind of comments whatsoever…
el Trent edited this post 1 year, 8 months ago. Read the previous text »
im a douchebag.
i failed kindergarten and im now living in my mums basement
BaconByAnyOtherName edited this post 1 year, 8 months ago. Read the previous text »
baconator is a douchebag.
he failed kindergarten and is now living in his mums basement
el Trent edited this post 1 year, 8 months ago. Read the previous text »
baconator is a douchebag.
he failed kindergarten and is now living in his mums basement. oops, i confused him with me. i also forgot to mention im too fat to move, ive been sitting at this computer for several years.
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