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INSIDE TO THE OUT

I looked inside your teardrops to see what i could find.
Was it sorrows past or born of now or something on the rise
The horizon of comings The horizon of dreams The horizons of dispair
These tears that tell the story of all our hopes and fears
A word left unsaid ….The blood i bled…That might have held the key
To unlock doors inside the hearts of you and them and me
The tiny drops of pain you shed could never really hide

The hurt of all we ever feel captured in our eyes

Micro torrents of soulful rain slowly waters fields of flesh
These silent lonely gutters overflowing highways of the wretched
So silent as to pass that some may never hear or know

Or see the sorrow inside that grows forced deep into the holes

A lonely drop of pain that falls somewhere in between
The face of beauty marred by cold and empty hollow dreams

THE FEELING WE HAVE NOTHING MORE THAN JUST TO ALLOW THIS

The weakest part that scars the heart will always meet

Do you cry for beauty or love so overwhelmed
Like babies eyes that bring you dry upon the shores of health

These little tears that spill our fears so intricate complexed
Emotions on the oceans of love and fear and death

I wipe away the liquid pain to see you underneath
oh beautiful one.. kind gentle.. humble lover of the peace
You who so lonely in your hour have become a timeless memory
You who would give them your all… … the truth
Yes You ,you who had been torn……the used
You who bring the inside to the out I embrace you whole…. tear and soul…
your sufferings

And we will overcome

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AKITHMA invited 11 users to read this post 1 year, 12 months ago.

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Je ne sais pa offline Verified User (2 years, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 174 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 12 months ago (9 hours, 7 minutes after post)

that is soooooo awesome . i just loved it.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 12 months ago (12 hours, 47 minutes after post)

Thank you for your writings, Akithma. This one came at the right time. Let me hang on to that last part: “And we will overcome.”

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Itchen, M4, GB | 1 year, 12 months ago (12 hours, 53 minutes after post)

Now This is Amazing!

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Bloomington, IN, US | 1 year, 12 months ago (1 day after post)

love it!

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Muldrow, OK, US | 1 year, 12 months ago (1 day, 2 hours after post)

wow i really like it… you jsut had to show me up huh… lol.. i think its amazing.

its relly beautiful

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 12 months ago (1 day, 8 hours after post)

beautifully expressed!

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Deira, 03, AE | 1 year, 11 months ago (5 days, 2 hours after post)

Beautiful as usual! :)

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Karachi, 05, PK | 1 year, 11 months ago (2 weeks after post)

He opens the theatre, and immediately closes it. [He raises expectation, and crushes it at the same time.]

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 7 months ago (4 months, 1 week after post)

I just read the story of my life in this poem

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (6 months after post)

Beauty and compassion,thats what i see in your words.It warms the heart.And I love the last line

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INSIDE TO THE OUT I looked inside your teardrops to see what i could find. Was it sorrows past or born of now or something on the rise The horizon of comings The horizon of dreams The horizons of dispair These tears that tell the story of all our hopes and fears A word left unsaid ….The blood i bled…That might have held the key To unlock doors inside the hearts of you and them and me The tiny drops of pain you shed could never really hide The hurt of all we ever feel captured in our eyes Micro torrents of soulful rain that waters fields of flesh These silent lonely gutters overflowing highways of the wrecked So silent as to pass that some may never hear or know Or see the pain inside that grows forced deep into the holes A lonely drop of pain that falls somewhere in between The face of beauty marred by cold empty hollow dreams THE FEELING WE HAVE NOTHING MORE THAN JUST TO ALLOW THIS The weakest part that scars the heart will always meet Do you cry for beauty or a love so overwhelmed Like babies eyes that bring you dry upon the shores of self These little tears that spill our fears so intricate complexed Emotions on the oceans of love and fear and death I wipe away the liquid pain to see you underneath The beautiful one.. the kind the gentle.. humble meek lover of the peace You who so lonely in your hour You who would give them all…YOU … the truth You who are torn……the used You who bring the inside to the out I embrace you whole…. tear and soul…your sufferings And we will overcome

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