Thought help: I’m trying to right a song for my girlfriend.

Shawno*i'mback!*

I’m trying to right a song for my girlfriend.

I was inspired by another song, i was thinking about in mine the corus would bee some thing like “you are the antidote to loneliness, the antidote to sadness” I can’t think of anything else she could be the antidote to.

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Shannon127 1 #
Phoenix, AZ, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (7 minutes after post)

“antidote to pain, you help to keep me sane”

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Shawno*i'mback!* 4 #
Seguin, TX, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (9 minutes after post)

Shannon127 wrote:
“antidote to pain, you help to keep me sane”

I like that, she does keep me sane.

Help me with: Going off the deep end.

sek270 0 #
Fond Du Lac, WI, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (13 minutes after post)

antidote of life, antidote to corruption of love, antidote to hate, antidote to fear, antidote of a breaking heart, antidote to suffering alone, antidote of time(as time doesn’t exist when you are with her) antidote to sad songs, antidote to depression, antidote to insomnia (as you can’t sleep without her)antidote to somnia(as you sleep well with her) antidote to reality

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Unnamed Desire 7 #
Miami, FL, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (19 minutes after post)

antidote to my heart u were there and always was from the start baby i love you and u know that i do i cant stop thinking about me and you……

see now you got me making up words for the whole song once i start singing its hard to stop

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Unnamed Desire 7 #
Miami, FL, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (23 minutes after post)

i dont know if u love her or not but that would be good lyrics to a song

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Shawno*i'mback!* 4 #
Seguin, TX, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (26 minutes after post)

Yes i love her, she loves me to we’ve been together for 4 months, i told her i was going to right her a song like 2 months ago i have bad writers block.

Help me with: Going off the deep end.

Unnamed Desire 7 #
Miami, FL, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (27 minutes after post)

are u guys going to get married?

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Unnamed Desire 7 #
Miami, FL, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (28 minutes after post)

at least do you think so?

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Shawno*i'mback!* 4 #
Seguin, TX, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (28 minutes after post)

I hope so, i;m 16 she’s 15..

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Unnamed Desire 7 #
Miami, FL, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (33 minutes after post)

have u thought about proposing and all that other stuff?

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Shawno*i'mback!* 4 #
Seguin, TX, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (37 minutes after post)

I want to do it in a nice resurant that she would like and i would get on my knees in front of every body and propose to her, or a secluded place at night like the park next to the river, but it is to early to worry about it.

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Unnamed Desire 7 #
Miami, FL, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (38 minutes after post)

thats cool

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Unnamed Desire 7 #
Miami, FL, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (39 minutes after post)

any fighting going on between u two lately? if not then u guys are like totally the perfect couple

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Shawno*i'mback!* 4 #
Seguin, TX, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (42 minutes after post)

She’s really shy so i don’t know about doing it in from of a bunch of people. In the time that we’ve been together we haven’t fought, raised our voises to each other, I never been mad at her and she said she’s never been mad at me either.

Help me with: Going off the deep end.

Anonymous #
1 year, 11 months ago (43 minutes after post)

you are the antidote,
to the loneliness,
the sadness, the madness,
that is me.

tame this poison,
bring this noise in,
your epinephrine,
sets me free.

you are my anecdote,
the one i wrote,
now your story,
lives in me.

Unnamed Desire 7 #
Miami, FL, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (47 minutes after post)

thats really good

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Anonymous #
1 year, 11 months ago (47 minutes after post)

what is epinephrine?

Shawno*i'mback!* 4 #
Seguin, TX, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (48 minutes after post)

Anonymous wrote:
what is epinephrine?

Yeah

Help me with: Going off the deep end.

Shawno*i'mback!* 4 #
Seguin, TX, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (49 minutes after post)

So what about you you fly, any gf/bf?

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Unnamed Desire 7 #
Miami, FL, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (52 minutes after post)

sadly, no my mom says i got to have education first she said after college i can start dating thats gonna take a long time

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Shawno*i'mback!* 4 #
Seguin, TX, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (54 minutes after post)

That sucks, my mom says i can’t date untill i’m 18, although i have..

Help me with: Going off the deep end.

Unnamed Desire 7 #
Miami, FL, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (55 minutes after post)

my mom watches me and her friends have daughters and sons that go to my school so if i get a date my mom would know

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Anonymous #
1 year, 11 months ago (1 hour, 5 minutes after post)

“write” a song.
“chorus” of the song.

Anonymous #
1 year, 11 months ago (2 hours, 38 minutes after post)

No matter what you write your gf will love it because you went to the trouble of writing the song. Parents dont want their kids dating because they dont want pregnancies. Everyone will do whatever they want though lol

Barbyman 5 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 11 months ago (3 hours, 55 minutes after post)

you are the antidote to my wicked thoughts if its not on ,its not on…

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