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Renewal

Eric

Sometimes when the sun won’t shine and everything’s gone wrong
I sit and cry and wonder what the hell is going on
Something I did? Something I said? I’m afraid I just don’t know
But the reason I will not find out ’till angels’ trumpets blow.

There’s more men in this world than I
More reasons in this world than mine
More sins are in this world than mine
But no love in this world like thine.

I stand to contemplate the clouds, the fierce gusts and the rain
It seems this quiet world of ours has become quite insane
And yet through all this trauma I can still remember your smile
And somehow I can bear the storm and keep my calm the while.

There’s more poets in this world than I
More partners, lovers, friends than I
More hands and arms and lips than mine
But none has love that matches thine.

So when we stand with arms well crossed and all our bridges burnt
I think upon our time together, think of what I’ve learned
And though today you scream at me, I know that soon enough
I know your love does wait for me, a calm to match the rough.

Just a little poem I wrote a few minutes ago for a girl I used to know, hope you like it. If you get this, Laura, I’m thinking of you.

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letst offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 11 months ago (32 minutes after post)

yeah yeah i liked it very much very very much. The best poem I have read in English.

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letst offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 11 months ago (33 minutes after post)

Would you mind if i copy it and learn it?

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letst offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 11 months ago (34 minutes after post)

i hope

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Eric. offline Verified User (2 years) Long Term User Shouts: 19 #
Los Angeles, CA, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (14 hours, 35 minutes after post)

Go for it.

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Hahaha123 offline Verified User (1 year, 12 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 11 months ago (18 hours, 32 minutes after post)

wow… nice poetry you got goin there :P keep at it!

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AlmostLuver offline Verified User (1 year, 12 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
Santa Ana, CA, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (1 day, 21 hours after post)

Wow, I’m not good at writing poetry, but I still like it. And this one was SO sweet. I think when someone dedicates something to someone they like (maybe?) it’s SO AWFULLY ROMANTIC!

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Eric. offline Verified User (2 years) Long Term User Shouts: 19 #
Los Angeles, CA, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (1 day, 23 hours after post)

It was an old thing…haven’t seen her in over a year, no contact information. Big regret, can you tell?

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AlmostLuver offline Verified User (1 year, 12 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
Santa Ana, CA, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (2 days, 6 hours after post)

Yeah, I can tell. Do you know anybody who could talk to her for you, so you could get (back?) together?

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Eric. offline Verified User (2 years) Long Term User Shouts: 19 #
Los Angeles, CA, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (2 days, 13 hours after post)

Nope. There’s no course I haven’t explored; that ship has, regrettably, sailed.

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Louth, 19, IE | 1 year, 11 months ago (2 days, 13 hours after post)

thats really sweet

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creativeone2 offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 11 months ago (3 days, 1 hour after post)

Really sweet. Hopefully she’ll stumble across it someday.

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Eric. offline Verified User (2 years) Long Term User Shouts: 19 #
Los Angeles, CA, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (3 days, 21 hours after post)

So do I, thanks.

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luckycharms0 offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 11 months ago (4 days, 13 hours after post)

awww… how sweet. you’ve got a knack for poetry- keep at it!

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