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tell me what you think of this poem by me:

I looked at a mirror, say it looking back
Back of the head, front of the gaze
were is my head, under the bed?
How can I sleep, I must try to weep
If I can’t I must read
or eat
I must get stronger
but I will never be your co-worker

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mac_mac172 offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Phoenix, AZ, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (4 minutes after post)

I thought it was o.k.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 11 months ago (22 minutes after post)

eeh… ok

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Ggjett92 offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Norwich, NY, US | 1 year, 11 months ago (1 hour, 44 minutes after post)

it shows alot of scattered emotions i’m a slam poet and i think that ur main idea needs to be stronger than it is but over all it’s cool u should add on to it

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (8 months, 3 weeks after post)

Um… was that supposed to make sense?

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