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Listy gurl
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Pain

the great black gaping hole
that i thought was so close
to being closed has just
flown open with a vengeance
the lonliness swallows me whole
the pain that i thoght was gone
Fills me till i start crying
The one person that used to
make me laugh and feel better
when i feel like this is gone
he doesn’t talk to me anymore
when i need him most
hes just not here.
The light is dim, and i am
surronded by darkness, just
like before
my scars are open and bleedin
my heart feels like burstin
And i know for a fact now
that i love and need him
but hes not here
I lost my chance
i just want to curl up and die
the pain is just to strong

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☆lilies☆ offline Verified User (6 years, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 5 years, 4 months ago (12 minutes after post)

very deep.
this is the exact thing i
have in mind now.

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Rosina7 offline Verified User (5 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 10 #
Habrammun, 05, LB | 5 years, 4 months ago (3 hours, 6 minutes after post)

So deep , but still don’t think a person is worth dying for.

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An Unknown Location | 5 years, 4 months ago (3 hours, 24 minutes after post)

i agree 99%

but if i had kids i reckin i would die for them.

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Listy gurl offline Verified User (6 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
US | 5 years, 4 months ago (8 hours, 3 minutes after post)

The poem isn’t just about dying for him. Its about pain that i had from the past and not having him by my side intesifies the pain, but for the most part its pain from other things.

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