poems help: Enlightenment

Naska

Honolulu, HI, US

Enlightenment

As cold as ice,
As head as stone,
As black as night,
My heart is gone.

My will,
My conviction,
My mind,
All guide my direction.

But to what I’ll find,
I do not know,
I look for a sign,
But nothing shows.

Here I will stand,
Here I will stay,
Here I will end up,
This is my way.

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Naska changed the tags on this post: they were "Mind, Ice, Head, heart, Black, Find, Sign, night, Guide, Stone" 9 months, 2 weeks ago.

*lilies 776 #
An Undisclosed Location | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (3 minutes after post)

i sense that there is a feeling of uncertainty when you wrote this poem.
though not sure about it though.
i like the rythm of you work! :)

Help me with: Think of me.

Naska 6 #
Honolulu, HI, US | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (6 minutes after post)

Thank you. =) It’s a cheerful poem if you understand it, just written is a sad way.

*lilies 776 #
An Undisclosed Location | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (8 minutes after post)

great! :o)

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X1thousandtearX 1 #
Pleasantville, NY, US | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (19 minutes after post)

WOW! that WOW! i cant even put to words….tat is a great poem ^.^

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Naska 6 #
Honolulu, HI, US | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (21 minutes after post)

*^_^* Thank you.

X1thousandtearX 1 #
Pleasantville, NY, US | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (23 minutes after post)

=^.^= no problem…lolz i wish i can wright poems like that…but i only do love poems….so ya….=]

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heart? 1 #
London, 17, GB | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (37 minutes after post)

wheres honolulu?

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Naska 6 #
Honolulu, HI, US | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (40 minutes after post)

On Oahu, NW of Waikiki.

Black Beauty 0 #
US | 7 months, 4 weeks ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)

I beleve your poem is deep on alot of levels, what ever you pain is I beleive you have the answer and it will come as you continue expressing your self throught writing I write also and painis my muse, yet daily invetories are my solutions.

fletcher 36 #
AU | 6 months ago (3 months, 2 weeks after post)

What this says to me is, “I will stand my ground.”

Help me with: Academic monotony and mundane inadequecy..

Naska 6 #
Honolulu, HI, US | 6 months ago (3 months, 2 weeks after post)

I did and it was one of the best changes in my life.

jmlv123 0 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 2 weeks ago (6 months, 3 weeks after post)

the answer is in the statement.. you are on the right path, it will come to you if continued. but it might bring trouble with it… the more you know,,, the more your doubted. & afflicted. like all things great,, it has a price, but you cant buy it, most cant relate, but if you find it,,, use it to help,,,,, dont offer it as help,,, jealosy/envy/fear/& doubt is the day were in. not a good reward for your effort..

Help me with: its like a country song over here… lost wife,dog,car, home,@ noon 2 morrow.

Naska 6 #
Honolulu, HI, US | 2 months, 2 weeks ago (6 months, 3 weeks after post)

So true

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