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spiritedsoul
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Your smile…

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I sit there quielty and watch you with your still expression on your face,
I am with hesitation and unease hear the flattened words of your voice,
Your vanity are of what is the shell which makes you hold everything that is precious within you in,
But darling, When you show that smile on your face it excites me so much,
I feel the real you and know who you are when you show me expression on your face,
When you are closed in you are hidden away and I feel distanced from you, you are hidden away as a ship in the ocean lost many miles away,

But when you come out yourself your company gives me joy,
I do not care how long you spend on your appearance, and the amount you wish to spend on me,
That smile of yours is a million times more gratitude for me and is free,
And everytime I see it makes me go more crazy over you,
It is a gift which can be given to me from whichever age you are,
When you express what comes out your beautiful soul, it makes my heart melt with warmth,
And the way you touch me feels so tender and soft,

And although the transience of life takes away all of what we do,
let us live our life in pleasure instead of wishfull thinking of lasting impression,
Let us instead love ourselves for who we are.

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ScreaminglyWonderful offline Verified User (3 years) Long Term User Shouts: 12 #
Wilmington, NC, US | 1 year, 10 months ago (6 minutes after post)

Very nice Florence did you write that?

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 year, 10 months ago (7 minutes after post)

yeah
just now,
any feedback would be nice :)

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ScreaminglyWonderful offline Verified User (3 years) Long Term User Shouts: 12 #
Wilmington, NC, US | 1 year, 10 months ago (9 minutes after post)

it’s very thoughtful, the recipient of your affection is a lucky friend.

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 year, 10 months ago (16 minutes after post)

how do you mean reciptient of my affection?

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ScreaminglyWonderful offline Verified User (3 years) Long Term User Shouts: 12 #
Wilmington, NC, US | 1 year, 10 months ago (22 minutes after post)

the person you are writing this to

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 year, 10 months ago (28 minutes after post)

well, it is to no1 specific. it would be nice to have some1 to write too though.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 10 months ago (1 hour, 15 minutes after post)

it is so nice! :)

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 year, 10 months ago (1 hour, 54 minutes after post)

thanks lilies :)

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onli1oly offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
New York, NY, US | 1 year, 10 months ago (8 hours, 40 minutes after post)

Such a nice poem. !!!

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Delft, 11, NL | 1 year, 10 months ago (2 days, 3 hours after post)

Beautiful Flo ;) you really know how to demonstrate your love with words.

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OliveOil offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 10 months ago (2 days, 23 hours after post)

That was very nice Florence! I really like the line, “let us live our life in pleasure instead of wishful thinking of lasting impression” :)

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 year, 10 months ago (5 days after post)

thankyou :)

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spiritedsoul edited this post 1 year, 10 months ago. Read the previous text »

Your smile……………..
I sit there quielty and watch you with your still expression on your face,
I am with hesitation and unease hear the flattened words of your voice,
Your vanity are of what is the shell which makes you hold everything that is precious within you in,
But darling, when you show that smile on your face it excites me so much,
I feel the real you and know who you are when you show me expression on your face,
When you are closed in you are hidden away and I feel distanced from you, you are hidden away as a ship lost in the ocean,

But when when you come out yourself, your company gives me joy,
I do not care how long you spend on your appearance, and the amount you wish to spend on me,
That smile of yours is a million times more gratitude for me and is free
It is a gift which can be given to me from whichever age you are,
And although the transience of life takes away all of what we do,
let us live our life in pleasure instead of wishfull thinking of lasting impression,

Let us instead love ourselves for who we are.

nilch offline Verified User (2 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 18 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 10 months ago (5 days, 20 hours after post)

What a lovely poem florence:)

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spiritedsoul edited this post 1 year, 10 months ago. Read the previous text »

Your smile……………..
I sit there quielty and watch you with your still expression on your face,
I am with hesitation and unease hear the flattened words of your voice,
Your vanity are of what is the shell which makes you hold everything that is precious within you in,
When you show that smile on your face it excites me so much,
I feel the real you and know who you are when you show me expression on your face,
When you are closed in you are hidden away and I feel distanced from you, you are hidden away as a ship in the ocean lost many miles away,

But when when you come out yourself your company gives me joy,
I do not care how long you spend on your appearance, and the amount you wish to spend on me,
That smile of yours is a million times more gratitude for me and is free
It is a gift which can be given to me from whichever age you are,
And although the transience of life takes away all of what we do,
let us live our life in pleasure instead of wishfull thinking of lasting impression,

Let us instead love ourselves for who we are.

spiritedsoul edited this post 10 months, 1 week ago. Read the previous text »

Your smile……………..
I sit there quielty and watch you with your still expression on your face,
I am with hesitation and unease hear the flattened words of your voice,
Your vanity are of what is the shell which makes you hold everything that is precious within you in,
But darling, When you show that smile on your face it excites me so much,
I feel the real you and know who you are when you show me expression on your face,
When you are closed in you are hidden away and I feel distanced from you, you are hidden away as a ship in the ocean lost many miles away,

But when when you come out yourself your company gives me joy,
I do not care how long you spend on your appearance, and the amount you wish to spend on me,
That smile of yours is a million times more gratitude for me and is free,
And everytime I see it makes me go more crazy over you,
It is a gift which can be given to me from whichever age you are,
And although the transience of life takes away all of what we do,
let us live our life in pleasure instead of wishfull thinking of lasting impression,

Let us instead love ourselves for who we are.

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