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wow i just found this, a poem i wrote in highschool lol as im sure you will be able to tell i wasnt very happy, but what do you think of the poem?

The Apple of Insanity

The apple doesn’t fall far from the tree
But that isn’t what the truthful eye sees
Because the apple became the tree

Hidden from all to see
The rotting core beneath

As you fall, your hope is freedom
To run away from the tree
For that is what the apple strives not to be

Little known to that ill fated apple
It has already become what it has so desired
Not to be

Now to reach out with its own twisted roots
And spread such insanity
Hiding behind psychotic vanity
The roots reach out and grab the flute
To play the song, to turn the mind
To make it rot and become unkind

Perfection gained on the outside
Deception waiting in between
Corruption hiding inside the core

So luscious, so green, such a shine
Deliciously hidden the apple is so keen
The rotten flesh inside unseen
Its soul so bitter so poisoned, nothing is heard
Besides its whine

From the apple do not bite
For it will consume your sanity with all its might

This apple is sprung from poison roots
It will never see its own deception, for
Unhealthy fear of its own correction
Thus is the nature of the apple of insanity

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 10 months ago (3 hours, 7 minutes after post)

yo, thats realli good!!!!!!!!!!!!! im realli feelin it!!

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ahahaha word up erik its great ;-) now how do you like dem apples??

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UM | 1 year, 10 months ago (1 day, 5 hours after post)

lol who is erik?

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