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FOLLOW ME

“Follow me” she softly cries
The joy of youth within her eyes
She dances soft against the snow
Like a prayer whispered by the angels long ago

“Follow me” she softly cries
As the snowflakes slowly melt beneath the lies
The smile still lingers and lights her face
She knows they will be back to this place

“Follow me” she softly cries
As another soul passes her by
She keeps her heart, her spirit there
Because still yet she has a prayer

“Follow me” she softly cries
As she stares still deeper into his eyes
The innocence defiled with lies
Might still find solace as it dies

“Follow me” she softly cries
As thick red tears fall from her eyes
As he ventures off into the night
Her broken soul, battered and bruised, as she knows she has been used

“Follow me” she softly cries
With desperation in her eyes
She needs a soul, she needs a friend
A person on whom she can depend.

“Follow me” she softly cries
The animals even pass her by
A broken heart, a cloudy sky
The tolling hour is drawing nigh

“Follow me” she softly cries
The angels pass before her eyes
Her hand reaching to their joyous cries
A flicker of hope rejoins her eyes

“Follow me” she softly cries
The joy of death within her eyes
She dances soft against the snow
Recalling prayers of long ago

“Follow me” she softly cries
A final joy within her eyes
No more fear and no more lies
And in the snow, she softly dies

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JesusMurphy offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
An Undisclosed Location | 9 months, 3 weeks ago (19 minutes after post)

I have a poem with a moral, too.

Liquor befre beer,
you’re in the clear.
Beer before liquor,
throw up quicker.

Anonymous #
9 months, 3 weeks ago (20 minutes after post)

lol. nice.

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issybelle offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 38 #
Boulder, CO, US | 9 months, 3 weeks ago (37 minutes after post)

ok the moral you posted isn’t what i got from the poem.

but anyway i thought it was beautiful and you did the rhyming well.
you should try slant rhyme. i think you’d be good at it.

beautiful ♥

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\Herbrokenwings/ offline Verified User (9 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Undisclosed Location | 9 months, 3 weeks ago (1 day, 22 hours after post)

^.^ thank you!

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\Herbrokenwings/ edited this post 9 months, 3 weeks ago. Read the previous text »

FOLLOW ME

“Follow me” she softly cries
The joy of youth within her eyes
She dances soft against the snow
Like a prayer whispered by the angels long ago

“Follow me” she softly cries
As the snowflakes slowly melt beneath the lies
The smile still lingers and lights her face
She knows they will be back to this place

“Follow me” she softly cries
As another soul passes her by
She keeps her heart, her spirit there
Because still yet she has a prayer

“Follow me” she softly cries
As she stares still deeper into his eyes
The innocence defiled with lies
Might still find solace as it dies

“Follow me” she softly cries
As thick red tears fall from her eyes
As he ventures off into the night
Her broken soul, battered and bruised, as she knows she has been used

“Follow me” she softly cries
With desperation in her eyes
She needs a soul, she needs a friend
A person on whom she can depend.

“Follow me” she softly cries
The animals even pass her by
A broken heart, a cloudy sky
The tolling hour is drawing nigh

“Follow me” she softly cries
The angels pass before her eyes
Her hand reaching to their joyous cries
A flicker of hope rejoins her eyes

“Follow me” she softly cries
The joy of death within her eyes
She dances soft against the snow
Recalling prayers of long ago

“Follow me” she softly cries
A final joy within her eyes
No more fear and no more lies
And in the snow, she softly dies

Moral: Be nice to everyone. You don’t know their past, they could be having just as bad a day as you, maybe worse. Just a thought….

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