Love help: hello this is bhumika vats..a 11th grade student..this is my poem..the way I live life..tell me how did you all find it? - Help.com

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hello this is bhumika vats..a 11th grade student..this is my poem..the way I live life..tell me how did you all find it?

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BUT I LOVE MY SOLITUDE THE MOST…
Though with ye I chatter,
meaningless gabbles I scatter,
jovially,jauntily,jerkily I smile,,
dance around outcasting my fancy style,,
though with ye I jabber merrily,,,
live at the most and laugh heartily,,,
yet…yet…yet…
away from the worldly ghost,
I love my solitude the most.
I love to ponder on my own thoughts,
to tie the heart with the soul in knotts.
I love it when my aroma cuddles me,
I love it when my lonelyness curls me.
I love it when my heart consoles my tears,
when my soul controls my fears.
when am tottally out of world’s reach,
with none to scold,taunt or preach.
I love to stare endlessly at the ceilings,
discover,notice,study and judge my own feelings.
I love to be alone and hug my own touch,
howl loudly but silently as such.
I love to play the strings of my own silent symphony,
to find solace in my own inner harmony.
though with ye I will still always stroll,
yet my heart I will not show you all,
and still as a secret…
away from the worldly ghost,
I will love my solitude the most..
-Bhumika vats

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orangefoot offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (3 hours, 8 minutes after post)

heehee… thats awesome.
totally feeling ya.

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tiwari.thegrea offline Verified User (9 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
Mehrauli, 07, IN | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (21 hours, 23 minutes after post)

nice…

I think I should rply wth a poem…

perhaps im done.

with this world,

with this moment of my life.

my story is undone.

twisted and not fun.

mixed up in lies and crys.

you shall never see the real me inside.

i shall protect myself from any harm to be done.

no more, for i shall stand and be the only one.

ill start building my walls,

no gaps, no holes no nothing.

just me and these walls,

i will close myself off from the world.

its for the best i shall say.

its for the best.

babe, just know i love you so.

i just gotta let you go.

i guess, our time is not now.

maybe im just foolish and shouldn’t have let you out

babe, you amazing.

lord, help her find true love, for i cant give that to her.

my lord, help her have strength and guide her to a good place.

lord, help all those lost souls, for they need more help then i.

i will survive.

with these walls i will.

i just need to be alone.

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Nickstrick offline Verified User (9 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
New Delhi, 07, IN | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (1 day, 9 hours after post)

hi

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Nickstrick offline Verified User (9 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
New Delhi, 07, IN | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (1 day, 9 hours after post)

hey i cant add u /y

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