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im sort of a poem/song writer and i wanted to start posting some of my work.

i love to hear your opion on my “works of art” ;-) here is my first one. It dosent have a name yet but its a song:

VERSE 1
im just an extrodinary girl
living in an ordinary world
i wnat to stand out
scream and shout
but you keep puting me down

BRIDGE
if you cant handle me
then i am going to have to leave
i want have you pushin me down
to something so ordinary
(so boring)

Chours
i need a boy who can handle me
that can dodge the punches i may throw
who is tough and mean
and knows how i like to roll

Verse 2
i may look soft and sweet
but underneath is someone mean
so is the guy you gonna get me
(handel me)

Bridge/Chours X2

I wont have you pullin me down
i want the boy who can handle me
not turn me around…

Chours(repeat)

So what did you think? i would like so titles for it to. remember this is the first of many!
remember: you try doin this

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Commander Ikari offline Verified User (9 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 378 #
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get someone to sing it, add instrumentals, make a video, put it on youtube, then post a link

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Jackie Chan offline Verified User (9 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
Dallas, TX, US | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (1 minute after post)

don’t do it, anything you post here belongs to cnet after you post it unless you’ve already gottin it copyrighted

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Fan(g) Of Twilight offline Verified User (11 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 12 #
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Commander Ikari wrote:
get someone to sing it, add instrumentals, make a video, put it on youtube, then post a link

i dnt know how to do any of that stuff. i may be good with the computer but thats one thing i dnt get.

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Commander Ikari offline Verified User (9 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 378 #
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mabye someone on help could sing, some guy make up music to set it to, put it together, and have an animated music video

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Tulsa, OK, US | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (35 minutes after post)

Sucks big time.

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Fan(g) Of Twilight offline Verified User (11 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 12 #
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adsfasdfasfs wrote:
Sucks big time.

bite me. you try makin a song. :-p

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Commander Ikari offline Verified User (9 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 378 #
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hell ya tink! stand up against the haters!

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Fan(g) Of Twilight edited this post 9 months, 2 weeks ago. Read the previous text »

im sort of a poem/song writer and i wnated to start posting some of my work. i love to hear your opion on my “works of art” ;-) here is my first one. It dosent have a name yet but its a song:

VERSE 1
im just an extrodinary girl
living in an ordinary world
i wnat to stand out
scream and shout
but you keep puting me down

BRIDGE
if you cant handle me
then i am going to have to leave
i want have you pushin me down
to something so ordinary
(so boring)

Chours
i need a boy who can handle me
that can dodge the punches i may throw
who is tough and mean
and knows how i like to roll

Verse 2
i may look soft and sweet
but underneath is someone mean
so is the guy you gonna get me
(handel me)

Bridge/Chours X2

I wont have you pullin me down
i want the boy who can handle me
not turn me around…

Chours(repeat)

So what did you think? i would like so titles for it to. remember this is the first of many!

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Fan(g) Of Twilight offline Verified User (11 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 12 #
An Undisclosed Location | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (2 hours, 20 minutes after post)

peace4life wrote:
“Pushin’ me down.” Nicceee song=]

perfect name! thankies!!!

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neku offline Verified User (2 years, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (5 hours, 27 minutes after post)

Try posting at Associated Content, they will pay you for it. From http://w2c.info

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vickierhodesm offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
Missoula, MT, US | 9 months, 2 weeks ago (19 hours, 15 minutes after post)

I thought it was good except for the spelling…jk..lol…here is a suggestion for a title. One Track MInd! I think more women should feel this way.

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