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My poems your opinions

these are 4 poems from 4 diffrent times i wrote i want to know what you think of each possibly numbered 1,2,3,4 :P

we all start our trails with a dim light,
we all have hope when there is none,
we see all that we can see when others can not,
to die now would leave a question,
what if we did what we were ment to do,
how much more harm can it take,
so i stand here before you with my hand out,
will you take this chance with me and take it,
not for only you but to show you can be true.
that this one deed you did your self,
that brought you to a nother trail,
where your end was just the begining,
where your life took a stand,
that from there on you would be remembered,
as the one who took that chance.

I’ve walked alone so very long i’ve had to walk against the cold and say goodbye to my past,
no father or mother there to hold me tightly i’ve learned to go my own path,
through a past of sorrow i’ve longed for the day to be in the arms of one that will love me for me,
i’ve walked alone to understand who i am and what i want,
i want to save your life at hand i want to stand at heavens gates and
say i was the one who did it all who put there life on the line for those who could’nt care,
that i cared for those who were not much them selfs,
and that i gave my life to give another a second chance.
to smile and to know that i did my best to help those i love,
through the hate of life i’ve stood my ground and helped as much as i can,
i leave behind my words at hand,
that things can change according to plan,
that love can survive the harshest times,
and can be warmth in the coldest places as well,

I sing this song for the one that means it all:

If i had to sing today i’d have to say you were the one that made,
a voice so pure echo out today that sang a song that no one else could convay,
that told a story of a long life gone of some one who was held so dear at heart,
I walk alone some times at night and wonder how well you are tonight,
I know i walk alone some times and feel the cold of my own unknown,
Caused by somthing i’ve let hurt me more then it had to do then anything before,
I stand there now letting it all go the hate and sorrow that i had has now began to flow,
its gone from me and now i see,
that not everything you have is truely forever,
that life gives you tests to see you struggle,
To let your heart beat on forever,
but for one person in life now you’ll love forever,
that person will stand by you in the cold and hold your head up in the snow,
will follow you through the hardest times and will catch you when you fall,
A song for one that makes it happen the song to go on for every one to capture,
So i sing this song for you so that you know that your the one whos true,
not just a face who i’ve met before but some one whos special and means even more,

A Place i was:
in life i’ve walked down many trails,
I’ve cried and laughed at things to go,
I’ve gotten angry and forgoten it all,
I’ve held friends and i’ve morn deaths,
I’ve lost my mind and got the best,
A place i was that cant be changed,
being happy there was all that remains,
A place where i could be happy,
A place with my friends to stay.
I lost so much but now im happy to be there again.

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