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~SuPerNoVa~
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Well im bored…

..So heres another poem! :D *side note:by the way…This im thinking about putting this poem in one of my new poem books. So if you could tell me what you think. It would be much appreciated!

“Broken Road”

Light that falls down upon a broken road
Seeing the very thing that can only be hidden by the years of a false smile
Behind childish eyes
Hidden in the laughter
It resides in the velvety darkness
The tears unshed
So many words coated with bitter sweet lies for there pleasure
Not allowing myself the truth
Now lost in the sanctuary of ones own misunderstanding
Hid behind a smiling mask
Searching for oneself in the twilight of a forgotten soul
Darkness falls upon the broken road
Hidden in the things that are not hid but are not seen because of the blind

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~SuPerNoVa~ offline Verified User (7 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
Pilottown, LA, US | 7 months, 2 weeks ago (19 minutes after post)

Yeah…emotion tends to get wrapped up in my words…

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~SuPerNoVa~ offline Verified User (7 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
Pilottown, LA, US | 7 months, 2 weeks ago (24 minutes after post)

mike19 wrote:

~forever-n-luv~ wrote:
Yeah…emotion tends to get wrapped up in my words…
Thats cool though, I am really bad at puting my feelings into words.

It’s not really that hard. You just kind of put what you are feeling and mean it when you are saying it or writting it. :)

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sarah-ann offline Verified User (7 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 7 months, 2 weeks ago (32 minutes after post)

that great thought u are very gift .it good to let out emotion i wish i can do that

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