Just bunch of feelings
How does it feel to live on the edge?
Sorry I’m still looking for the bridge
Give me more faith tell me to hold on
You know it won’t be easy to move on
I’m always thinking , scared but bold
Hope to reach you before I feel so old
It’s a long road when no one in the end
Hope life was gentle & easy to bend
Will you be waiting for me with roses?
Or will I be the last one who always loses
Are you there , am I even on the list?!
Oh I forget , you don’t even exist.
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Maybe they do exist = )
~points at himself~
XD
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An Unknown Location | 10 months, 1 week ago (3 hours, 29 minutes after post)
Deep,in a good way……….Anything you want to talk about? if,just let me know :)
Thats ace!!!!
Love the last couple of lines…
It makes you feel like a sort of ‘buzz’ when you read something that makes perfect sense and is put in such a clever way..
Keep em commin, loves it!
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Just bunch of feelings
How does it feel to live on the edge?
Sorry I’m still looking for the bridge
Give me more faith tell me to hold on
You know it won’t be easy to move on
I’m always thinking , scared but bold
Hope to reach you before I feel so old
It’s a long road when no one in the end
Hope life was gentle & easy to bend
Will you be waiting for me with roses
Or will I be the last one who always loses
Are you there , am I even on the list
Oh I forget , you don’t even exist.
Nextstar, life is about today. Yesterday is gone. We all deal with those feelings at some point in our lives, but we become better people because of those hard times. We become stronger.
Enjoyed that…applies to my life for sure!
Spunky101 wrote:
Nextstar, life is about today. Yesterday is gone. We all deal with those feelings at some point in our lives, but we become better people because of those hard times. !
I totally agree with you .
states of transition are always unnerving (sometimes exciting, but you still feel like you’re standing on not so solid ground)… it seems, to me, to be a perception problem… where are we looking from, what do we believe we are looking at… we pretend to think we understand certain things when in reality they collapse from underneath us… but I believe you have faith… and it’s that faith that you hold onto that will pull you through… you may have come to the end of one path… but you’re on another, less trodden, one now… keep courage, stay strong!
He does exist and he waiting with dozens and dozens of roses in all different colors , your day will come my friend . Their is nothing but true happiness at the end of your story .
I love your poem and I would say more but it would only start a argument. And I don’t want to do that with this lovely post.
Oh, sure he exists!
And you’re on somebody’s list, for certain.
Quite a few lists, I believe.
Things will change when you least expect them to.
Better later, but right!
that was beautiful hun… thanks for sharing… but if this poem is something that you are feeling.. always remember… ill hold that rose for ya..
Actually this poem was about my ex & my relationship with him .. I was trying to make our relationship to work but it didn’t work because I realized that I’m the only one making effort to make it work . I realized that he was not the person I thought he is.
ah, but you’re still a rose… you just need a person who appreciates roses… maybe he’s more into daffodils… :P
Nextstar, understand that last post. To make things work it take two…unfortunately, some people want to adventure over in the next pasture where the green looks greenier…and, it never is…there are problems in that pasture also…
tumble weed wrote:
ah, but you’re still a rose… you just need a person who appreciates roses… maybe he’s more into daffodils… :P
hehe , I don’t know tumble weed but I like any kind of plants .
I don’t care what kind of flowers he likes , we broke up & I’m not going back , no way ..
haha… we don’t want you to go back… we want you to find someone who appreciates you for who you are
nextstar wrote:
I don’t care what kind of flowers he likes , we broke up & I’m not going back , no way ..
Good for you, no point in wasting your own time with someone that can’t appreciate you.
nextstar wrote:
I don’t care what kind of flowers he likes , we broke up & I’m not going back , no way ..
You do what you have do and move on.
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Ireland-1 wrote:
nice poem, simple yet elegant, deep yet moving and beautiful, I love it, I think that it would make a great poem if of course you got published.
Thanks for your nice reply .
Ireland-1 wrote:
no, it is I who should be thanking you for posting that beautiful and elegant poem.
I’m so glad that you liked it , you did help me feel better because of your nice replys.
thanks Zara :)
Thanks Marriiii
This is really cute, its deep.
And thanks for your replys on my posts. They really helped. x
aeroflychi wrote:
aww your so cool, you write poems too!! hahaha
I find writing a way of self expression , i don’t intend to write poems , i just write .
Nice one
It sounds like the feelings you have for someone who you think is different to who they are
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