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Dj. Tremble (PAR)
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Poetry help!

!!

There once lived a kid who’s name was Jake Myers,
Who did anything his father desired.
Until that fateful day that his father said
He shouldn’t hang around that young boy Fred.

But you see Fred was his friend,
But father tried to distend
So their friendship broke,
And they never spoke.

(Or so father thought!)

They were like peanut butter and jelly,
and they both were rather brainy.
They got together,
it was quite cleaver.

This was all because …

i am stumped… even my last stanza wasn’t so great… I can’t think of anything i can put there. (As to why the Father would not like Jake to see Fred)

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ripjamme offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (2 weeks, 6 days after post)

because fred looks up jakes pants

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sarahhh offline Verified User (6 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 1 week ago (3 weeks, 6 days after post)

Jake’s dad could’ve hated Fred’s dad for some reason…
lol I’m sorry I’m not good at this.

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evilpapay offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 4 months, 2 weeks ago (2 months, 2 weeks after post)

This was all because Fred,
While smart in the head,
Was actually gay,
and jake’s father was against that way

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