Love help: Is this good or bad?

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my love for you strectehs beyond belief
your my soul
my sprit
my one true love
I long to hold you close
and kiss your soft tender lips
and gaze deep into your eyes
baby, your the only one for me
my greatest joy
the one i chesire
and hold so close to me
you make me feel so loved and appricated
when i with u nothing could be more right
i adore you baby
with all my heart
i’m devoted to you
my love will last forever
cuz baby…….
I LOVE YOU

sorry it’s so long…. but what do people think of it?

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thep 36 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 8 months ago (28 minutes after post)

I have spell checked and this is the corrected version. I am not critising your spelling. Just trying to help out a little.

My love for you stretches beyond belief,
your my soul.
My sprit,
my one true love.
I long to hold you close,
to kiss your soft tender lips
and gaze deep into your eyes.
Baby, your the only one for me,
my greatest joy,
the one I desire
and hold so close to me.
You make me feel so loved and appreciated.
When I am with you nothing could be more right.
I adore you baby,
with all my heart.
I’m devoted to you,
my love will last forever
Because baby…….
I LOVE YOU.

I am not good at being a poetry critic, it is nice and understandable.

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Katie 1 #
GB | 1 year, 8 months ago (55 minutes after post)

I like it a lot.
So yeah, it’s good. Well done.

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Anonymous #
1 year, 8 months ago (2 hours, 10 minutes after post)

thep wrote:
I have spell checked and this is the corrected version. I am not critising your spelling. Just trying to help out a little.

My love for you stretches beyond belief,
your my soul.
My sprit,
my one true love.
I long to hold you close,
to kiss your soft tender lips
and gaze deep into your eyes.
Baby, your the only one for me,
my greatest joy,
the one I desire
and hold so close to me.
You make me feel so loved and appreciated.
When I am with you nothing could be more right.
I adore you baby,
with all my heart.
I’m devoted to you,
my love will last forever
Because baby…….
I LOVE YOU.

I am not good at being a poetry critic, it is nice and understandable.

thanx i could do with that! n i can’t spellm so critise it all you want!

MittensInSummertime 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 8 months ago (3 hours, 50 minutes after post)

remember: you’re is you are, and your is a possessive of you.

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Anonymous #
1 year, 8 months ago (4 hours, 3 minutes after post)

possessive??

MittensInSummertime 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 8 months ago (4 hours, 42 minutes after post)

My car, your car, his car, her car, its car, their car.

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Anonymous #
1 year, 8 months ago (7 hours, 15 minutes after post)

i likew ryming poems better

maymayj 0 #
An Unknown Location | 8 months, 2 weeks ago (1 year after post)

Sprit is spelled Spirit. Funny that spell check didn’t catch it.

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