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I can’t think of a beginning for this poem!

You are always there for me
and these words you may mark.
You are my light when i’m in the dark.
I am never alone. cuz
You are my shadow when i feel alone.
You are my warmth when i am cold.
You are my strength when i feel bold.
You are mine and
I am here for you.
and i love you.

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issybelle edited this post 1 year, 8 months ago. Read the previous text »

I can’t think of a beganing for this poem!

and these words you may mark.
You are my light when i’m in the dark.
I am never alone. cuz
You are my shadow when i feel alone.
You are my warmth when i am cold.
You are my strength when i feel bold.
You are mine and
I am here for you.
and i love you.

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Sir Urgdu offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
Evanston, IL, US | 1 year, 8 months ago (4 minutes after post)

I say “i love you”
and these words you may mark

kinda goes with the last line of the poem…

Im no poet but it seemed logical to me =/

:)

Best of Luck on the poetry- urgdu

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BKH199 offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 8 months ago (10 minutes after post)

how about “you are always there for me
and with these words you may mark…”

it sounds weird but you said you’d alway be there for them
good luck!

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Shawno*i'mback!* offline Verified User (2 years, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
Seguin, TX, US | 1 year, 8 months ago (14 minutes after post)

BKH199 wrote:
how about “you are always there for me
and with these words you may mark…”

it sounds weird but you said you’d alway be there for them
good luck!

I like it, thats a good start

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BKH199 offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 8 months ago (15 minutes after post)

thank you

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Shawno*i'mback!* edited this post 1 year, 8 months ago. Read the previous text »

I can’t think of a beginning for this poem!

and these words you may mark.
You are my light when i’m in the dark.
I am never alone. cuz
You are my shadow when i feel alone.
You are my warmth when i am cold.
You are my strength when i feel bold.
You are mine and
I am here for you.
and i love you.

Help me with: Going off the deep end.

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Help me with: Going off the deep end.
Cell offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 54 #
Winnipeg, MB, CA | 1 year, 8 months ago (43 minutes after post)

Urgdu wrote:
I say “i love you”
and these words you may mark

kinda goes with the last line of the poem…

Im no poet but it seemed logical to me =/

:)

Best of Luck on the poetry- urgdu

I totally thought the same thing before looking at this reply!

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Anonymous #
1 year, 8 months ago (18 hours, 41 minutes after post)

How about “I like big butts and I cannot lie.
You brought them to the table.
You are always there for me … etc”

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