I someone to edit my compare and contrast essay.
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Do you have the file on your computer? If yes copy and paste to a reply or something. If no…get a parent to edit. Either that or type it up in a reply so I can edit it and give it back to you
My teacher wants a student and I to do a comparison and contrast essay together. I have the introduction and the contrast part.
introduction-
While discussing many things in our English Comp
Fundamentals class, Edna and I found out that we have both
similarities and some differences.
Contrast-
Next, We found that we did not have everything in
common. Our differences relate to our marital status, our
preferred seasons, and our selected holiday celebrations.
First, we both experienced married life; however, I am married
and Edna is single, even though she desires to be married one
day she continues to pray for the man God has for her.
Second, I enjoy the changing from summer to fall; whereas,
Edna likes the rebirth and renewing of spring. I enjoy the fresh
crisp breeze that flows through the air. Edna loves to watch the
flowers blossom and to hear the wonderful sound of the birds
chirp. Finally, Christmas is my favorite holiday to celebrate;
however Edna enjoys Easter. I enjoy the warmth that is
presented by my family throughout Christmas day. On
Easter day Edna loves to see the array of colors on the clothes
that the people at her church pleasantly present. Having many
differences, we found out that we still can continue to have
many more pleasant conversations.
What do you suggest I do when my classmate has not called me to give me her comparison part of the essay. Our essay is due tomorrow evening. We discussed a little bit about each other in class.
My teacher wants myself and another student collaborate on a compare and contrast essay. I have the introduction and the contrast part.
introduction-
While discussing many things in our English Computer
Fundamentals class, Edna and I found out that we both have
some similarities and some differences.
Contrast-
We found that we did not have everything in
common. Our differences relate to our marital status, our
preferred seasons, and our selected holiday celebrations.
First, we both experienced married life; however, I am currently married
and Edna is single. She desires to be married one
day and continues to pray for the man God has created for her.
Second, I enjoy the elegant transition from summer to fall; whereas,
Edna prefers the renewal of life from winter into spring. I enjoy the fresh
crisp breeze that flows through the air while Edna loves to watch the
flowers blossom, and hear the wonderful song of the springtime birds. Finally, Christmas is my favorite holiday to celebrate;
however Edna enjoys playful atmosphere Easter provides, while I enjoy the warmth that is
radiated by my family throughout the Christmas holiday. On
Easter day, Edna loves to see the array of colors on the clothes
that the people at her church delightfully present. Despite our many differences, we
found out that we still can continue to have many pleasant conversations.
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I suggest you take what you remember from your conversation and writing it youself. If Edna fails to produce evidence of her end of the collab then discuss with your teacher how you think you should be graded versus how Edna should be graded.
Thanks, thats a great idea.
My brain seems to be at a freeze right now. I am so ready for spring break next week. Will you be on-line for a little bit? If so maybe you can edit my comparison part and summary.
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