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Benjamin S.
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This is a poem I wrote called “Would You”, let me know what you think

would you live without your heart would you live without your soul
would you live without that something or someone making you whole
would you live without your wishes would you live without your dreams
would you live your life differently cuz the worst always happens it seems.
my question is why give up and forget about your dreams now
you can make your dreams come true the only way you know how
by telling yourself you can make them come true
no matter what you have to do or what you have to go through
Now would you tell that person who is special to you that you care
or would you give up, blame life and say it’s not fair
but why would you give up on your feelings
why would you always take the emotional beatings
would you tell them exactly how you feel
if you do then those dreams may just become real
Now would you live you life knowing you made mistakes
would you try to right the wrongs no matter what it takes
would you try to make yourself better would you try to improve
would you realize that forward is the only direction you can move
What would you do
would you tell me hi or would you tell me bye
What would you do
would you tell your dreams to stay or make them go away
What would you do

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ichbinda offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 8 months ago (26 minutes after post)

nice poem
i love it especially the last 4 lines

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Benjamin S. offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
Omaha, NE, US | 1 year, 8 months ago (29 minutes after post)

thank you very much

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mberube55 offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
Detroit, MI, US | 1 year, 8 months ago (1 hour, 22 minutes after post)

Its beautiful. I wish a girl would write me a poem.

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Benjamin S. offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
Omaha, NE, US | 1 year, 8 months ago (1 hour, 25 minutes after post)

Thank you. I wish a girl would write me one too. I have always been the one writing poems to girls but haven’t received one yet.

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mberube55 offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
Detroit, MI, US | 1 year, 8 months ago (1 hour, 31 minutes after post)

yea, i know how that goes. and the worst thing is, every girl i have ever written a poem to thinks its corny. need more sensative people in this world.

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Benjamin S. offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
Omaha, NE, US | 1 year, 8 months ago (1 hour, 43 minutes after post)

I hear that. People need to learn to think deeper.

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shol'vah offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
Anchorage, AK, US | 1 year, 8 months ago (2 hours, 14 minutes after post)

Ah, but that would require them to shed the materialistic center of their lives and venture into realms full of things that are unknown. I do like the poem; it speaks of things few people think much about anymore.

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sister_of_heave offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 8 months ago (1 week after post)

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i use ur poem here..
and i put a link on it too..
:) if its ok, then it would be fine..
if it’s not, do tell me.. and i’ll remove it..

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