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Garag, 19, IN

plz reply

The world of dreams
Beckons me again
It’s a dream of a world
With nothing else but pain…

Nothing feels right
Something is gone
I feel empty and hollow
My heart turns to stone…

It is you that I miss
It’s my soul that is gone
Is this my destiny?
Forever alone?

I’m tired of wanting
I’m tired of needing
And each time I succeed
I am left dead and bleeding…

Say you love me
And I’ll love you too
But I’ll never say that I do
‘Cause you wouldn’t love me too…

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zetzer_ offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
Opa Locka, FL, US | 6 months ago (3 minutes after post)

dude, dats deep, is really awesome the simpkicty behind the words you used, great poem!

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manas_047 offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 6 #
Garag, 19, IN | 6 months ago (5 minutes after post)

thnxx :-(

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Rahat Lokum offline Verified User (8 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 6 #
An Undisclosed Location | 6 months ago (5 minutes after post)

This part has especially good rhythm:

I’m tired of wanting
I’m tired of needing
And each time I succeed
I am left dead and bleeding…

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manas_047 offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 6 #
Garag, 19, IN | 6 months ago (6 minutes after post)

cool?is that the word?

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hockeymaniac500 offline Verified User (7 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 38 #
An Undisclosed Location | 6 months ago (32 minutes after post)

that is deep, what made you write that? I feel your pain reading it. You seem like a great author.

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manas_047 offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 6 #
Garag, 19, IN | 6 months ago (17 hours, 57 minutes after post)

grt author??na… thank the gal who made this come out of me…

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manas_047 offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 6 #
Garag, 19, IN | 6 months ago (22 hours, 1 minute after post)

Life is pain—
Addicted
I am to this pain;
Slit the throat,
Watch you groan,
Wreathe in pain!

Stop mourning for the dead,
The living suffers,
You think you are devastated?
Enter me—
You can witness inhuman torment.

Death is pain—
Addicted
I am to this pain;
Mourning the souls of the dead,
Hearing the anguish in their voices,
Feeling the morbidity of their thoughts!

Look into my eyes—
What you see
Is not me,
Its just a dormant stage
Of what I’m expected to be.

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simplenina_79 offline Verified User (6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 4 weeks ago (1 day, 6 hours after post)

Mana_047…… i can relate wiht your poem…. :)

Say you love me
And I’ll love you too
But I’ll never say that I do
‘Cause you wouldn’t love me too…

these is what i exactly felt when im with my bf for 6years but now my xbf. i’ve loved him but i am not good enough for him. Too bad….

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hi ya offline Verified User (6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 4 weeks ago (2 days after post)

What a poet! I wish i could express my feelings thru poems…Congratulations!

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