Love help: What you have done?

-Manas-

What you have done?

What have you done?
What have you taken away?
a haze of chaos as memories disappear.
Once we savored bliss,
untainted and innocent,
but your thirst perished.
A vengeful cloud of hatred -
emotions follow pain, follow darkness,
love left to die.
In a storm of vengeance,
i still love you…..

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BabyB(kira) 5 #
An Unknown Location | 7 months, 1 week ago (5 minutes after post)

manas wrote antheor good poem

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BabyB(kira) 5 #
An Unknown Location | 7 months, 1 week ago (6 minutes after post)

aww you need a hug

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BabyB(kira) 5 #
An Unknown Location | 7 months, 1 week ago (7 minutes after post)

oks

dancersiss #
An Unknown Location | 7 months, 1 week ago (10 minutes after post)

very nice poem

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Hi_Sai 6 #
Chicago, IL, US | 7 months, 1 week ago (24 minutes after post)

****…I thought you were asking everybody what they’d done. Darn. There goes my chance to start a blank slate.
Maybe next time….XD

Nice poem. Short simple. Kinda moody but I like it. And I totally relate to the feeling. :P

Good work. Keep it up.

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Bfly 2 #
An Unknown Location | 7 months, 1 week ago (56 minutes after post)

good poem…love sucks…it shouldn’t, but more often than not, it does.

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alchemiki #
An Unknown Location | 7 months, 1 week ago (11 hours, 3 minutes after post)

hello friend,

i understand this poem too well.
Sometimes all your commitment, the fir ein your soul, the way you revere and respect memories and the love that goes with them seem mepty to others, especially the one that betrays you. I am in this situation, virtually lost my house, my wife, my business, my friends, my mothers investment, because of one woman - she is blinded by rage……I have writeen poems too….been in this a long time …hope what has happened to me never happens to you.

may you be free from all harm and suffering

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cutepixy 37 #
An Undisclosed Location | 7 months ago (3 days, 11 hours after post)

that is such a nice poem. i wish a guy wrote me poems. i write them about people and their good only when i’m inspired.

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