IDEA help: Looking for a poem - Help.com

Looking for a poem

I don’t have any idea what it’s called. I think I first saw it in a book…probably from the library. It was probably a book about drawing or watercolor painting, as those are hobbies of mine.

The poem is about a crow that takes a shiny thing from the narrator, then tells him that he’s an artist, and should go make his own bauble….

Anyone have any idea what I’m talking about?

This open post was written 4 months ago | V/U/S: 638, 35, 10 | Edit Post | Leave a reply | Report Post

Reciprocity (7) Many thank yous! The poster has helped others since their own post was made.

Since writing this post Dragon_Lady has helped in 7 other users' posts within the last 4 days. Dragon_Lady is a verified member, has been around for 6 months, 2 weeks and has 1 posts and 1,580 replies to their name.

Post Tags (12)

Replies (35)

Where were you?

Click and drag to move the map around. FAQ: How we place people on this map »
You can also watch events on Help.com as they happen
Mouse over the map for 2 seconds to see an expanded, interactive view

Blue Moon offline Verified User (4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 4 months ago (4 days, 2 hours after post)

First of all, thank you very much for your kind words to my post. Secondly, I wish I could help you with yours. I will keep a look out, and anything I see that remotely seems like what you are looking for, I’ll send your way:)

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 4 months ago (4 days, 5 hours after post)

Thanks! :)

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
betterthandrugs offline Verified User (3 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (2 weeks after post)

i think i have an idea.hold on let me find it
im not sure if i still remember it
from my literature class

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (2 weeks after post)

Oh, that would be sooo nice! Thank-you!

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
betterthandrugs offline Verified User (3 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 2 weeks ago (2 weeks, 1 day after post)

darn! i can’t remember it.. im so sorry
my mind keeps going back to one of edgar allan poe’s poems
the raven.. but thats way different than what you were describing

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 2 weeks ago (2 weeks, 1 day after post)

Yeah…I know. I keep thinking of “nevermore” too…but no, that’s not even close.

I’m almost certain it was in an art book of some kind, but I sat one day and looked through every single art book in the library, and it isn’t there. But…they sold a bunch of titles a few months ago, so it was probably in one of them.

Or, it was some other kind of book altogether…my memory isn’t the steel trap it used to be. :(

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Plox Nork offline Verified User (4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 14 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 2 weeks ago (2 weeks, 1 day after post)

The only poem I can find on google with the words crow, shiny and bauble in it is this:
http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewP…

But it doesn’t sound like your poem. =|

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 2 weeks ago (2 weeks, 1 day after post)

Wow. That’s a cool poem. :) But…not the one I’m looking for. I’ve googled as many things as I could think of, but since I don’t really remember any of the exact words, it’s hard. :(

It was mostly about being creative, and recognizing that artists make their own habitats and create their own realities…only not in those words, you know?

It was just a couple of stanzas -the narrator finds a shiny thing, a crow takes it, he wants it back, and the crow tells him something like “Artist, go make your own” or something like that….

It was an awesome little poem, and I wish I’d copied it when I first read it.

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
mumstheword offline Verified User (3 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 42 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 2 weeks ago (2 weeks, 4 days after post)

hi dragon and thanks for being so supportive on my post. I’m wondering if the poem you are thinking of is one of Ted Hughes Crow series? I don’t know which one it might specifically be but from what you mention it might be one that fits the bill. (excuse the pun!)

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Help me with: Just to let you know …
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 2 weeks ago (2 weeks, 4 days after post)

I don’t know. I’ll look him up. :)

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
lonewolf3000 offline Verified User (3 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 2 weeks ago (2 weeks, 4 days after post)

I tried looking for it on the web but found a zillion things. But I have an idea:
Do you know at least a complete phrase from the poem? It would help if it is composed of a minimum of three or four words. And thanks for your reply to my post. It does help to realize that there are others who care, even for a perfect stranger. (No, I’m not perfect)

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Help me with: Last chance for me.
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 2 weeks ago (2 weeks, 4 days after post)

No, I don’t. :( I’ve tried. I really have. I only read the darn thing once, and just thought it was cool…. But later I thought of it again and wanted to buy a copy of it. :(

I’m glad to be able to help you. I have been helped a lot in my life by people who did not know me, and I see this as a tiny repayment. If it weren’t for a few strangers who took the time to listen and care, I probably wouldn’t be alive now. I haven’t forgotten that. :)

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
molly_baby_1 offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (4 weeks, 1 day after post)

you could go to google and type in poems with watever you want in them thats how i found this site!!!!

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
This account has been deactivated.
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (4 weeks, 1 day after post)

I’ve tried. Google doesn’t turn up what I’m looking for.

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
ann offline Verified User (2 months, 2 weeks) Shouts: 0 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 2 weeks ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)

Hi Dragon Lady,

thanks for your response. I saw my son in jail today. He is OK. The other inmates weren’t the scary, mean, monsters who will further corrupt my son I thought they would be. Yes, in some sick way, this is his rites of passage into manhood. It is hard also to “grow up” and realize mommy and daddy are sick of taking care of our adult tushes, that we cant be Peter Pans forever . . .

About your poem. What comes to mind is that maybe it is an Aesop’s Fable? I don’t know, just a hunch.

Well, thanks again.

Regards,

Anna

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Anony-Dreamer-Colle offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 164 #
Cornsay, D8, GB | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

have you found it? im looking…

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

No; I’m trying to get a hold of a copy of the Crow series, but none of the libraries here have it. :(

I don’t want to buy it if it’s not what I’m looking for. :(

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Anony-Dreamer-Colle offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 164 #
Cornsay, D8, GB | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

have a check on this website. im not sure if its any good but its worth a look.

http://www.geocities.com/crowpoetry/

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Anony-Dreamer-Colle offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 164 #
Cornsay, D8, GB | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)
Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Anony-Dreamer-Colle offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 164 #
Cornsay, D8, GB | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

can you remember any of the poem? just the odd line or so?

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

I can’t remember anything beyond the concept. I don’t remember even a single line for sure. :(

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Anony-Dreamer-Colle offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 164 #
Cornsay, D8, GB | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

can you remember anything about the book? author? name?

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

Nope. I know the book had nothing to do with poetry.

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Anony-Dreamer-Colle offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 164 #
Cornsay, D8, GB | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

hmm…anything??? im looking but nothings popping up… ill keep looking

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
timste offline Verified User (2 months, 1 week) Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)
Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

Very close, timste. Kinda that same voice. But in “my” poem, the crow steals the bauble and tells the artist he will have to make one of his own.

Still, I enjoyed reading that site! Thanks for the link. :)

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Anony-Dreamer-Colle offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 164 #
Cornsay, D8, GB | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)
Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Anony-Dreamer-Colle offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 164 #
Cornsay, D8, GB | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

is the poem in first person?

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Anony-Dreamer-Colle offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 164 #
Cornsay, D8, GB | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)
Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

Little-Dreamer-Colle wrote:
is the poem in first person?

Yeah; I think it was.

Little-Dreamer-Colle wrote:
http://crowsperch.blogspot.com/2007/0…

Nope; that’s not it, either. :(

Thanks for looking, though.

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Anony-Dreamer-Colle offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 164 #
Cornsay, D8, GB | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

where did you get the book in the first place? if it was a library then they might be able to find youre records and tell you…

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

Yes; I got the book in the library.

But, then our library closed for over a year because they had to find a new building.

Now, the books are all different. The librarian looked through his computer, but couldn’t find out what had been on the shelf before.

I suppose they could tell me what I’ve checked out in the past, but I’d have to be able to give them some reasonable time frame to look at; and I doubt I can do that. I read so much it might still be looking for a needle in a haystack.

It’s not really a big deal. I was just hoping someone might know what it was. It was an awesome poem, and I will forever kick myself for not paying more attention, but it was just one of those things an author includes for the hell of it, and at the time I was more focused on the book’s main subject.

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
missmeow offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
GB | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

Maybe could it be…

Exile

My hands have not touched pleasure since your hands,–
No,–nor my lips freed laughter since ‘farewell’,
And with the day, distance again expands
Voiceless between us, as an uncoiled shell.

Yet love endures, though starving and alone.
A dove’s wings cling about my heart each night
With surging gentleness, and the blue stone
Set in the tryst-ring has but worn more bright.

Probably not - but I quite liked this so thought I’d check anyways X

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Dragon_Lady offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 8 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

lol

No, that’s not it. But I do like it. :) Who’s the author?

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
mimi33310 offline Verified User (2 weeks, 6 days) Shouts: 12 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (3 months, 2 weeks after post)

i think ive heard of it but i dont remeber what the name is look it up online

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators

Invite Others to Help

A logged in and verified Help.com member has the ability to setup a Friends List and invite others to help with posts.