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Que Ahora (What Now)?

Miraba adelante para dormir.
Soño a veces, y usted está allí.
Y entonces Realizo, Here’ s la realidad de mi vida I’ VE viene odiar.
Los susurros descuidados calentaron la frialdad de mi sonrisa.
Érase una vez, Los movimientos atractivos largos de la confianza colorearon mi piel, Porque entonces, Usted estaba allí.
I don’ t sabe si I’ el ll olvida nunca Cómo usted me hizo todo Parezca completo.
Usted era la pasión por debajo la dureza de esas ondas de marea.
Para hundirme y me ahogaban.
Y entonces, Usted me dio su respiración, Y entonces Probaba el sabor dulce de la vida.
Ahora, necesito romper la tela intrincada, Usted ha tejido alrededor de mí.
La seguridad me acuna como un arrullo suave.
Pero por otra parte, Ésa era la única canción que quise oír.
Y entonces, usted la lanzó lejos.
Sensaciones agridulces, Retrasado como una cicatriz indeseada.
Usted me ocultó lejano de la verdad dolorosa, Y entonces Usted sacudió su colmo del corazón en el cielo de la noche.
Suficientemente lejos, Grité porque I couldn’ t lo considera.
Ahora, miro adelante para dormir.
Puedo soñar, Cuando usted estaba allí.
Pero como el amor insaciable,
Usted sigue siendo donde las memorias llaman como los vientos que frecuentan.

[English Translation]

I looked forward to sleep.
Sometimes I dream, and you are there.
And then
I realize,
Here’s the reality of my life I’ve come to hate.
Careless whispers heated the coldness of my smile.
Once upon a time,
Long sexy strokes of confidence coloured my skin,
Because then,
You were there.
I don’t know if I’ll ever forget
How you made everything to me
Seem complete.
You were the passion underneath the harshness of those tidal waves.
They used to sink me and drown me.
And then,
You gave your breath to me,
And then
I tasted the sweet flavor of life.
Now, I need to break the intricate web,
You have woven around me.
Safety cradles me like a soft lullaby.
But then,
That was the only song I wanted to hear.
And then, you threw it away.
Bittersweet sensations,
Lingered like an unwanted scar.
You hid me far away from the painful truth,
And then
You tossed your heart high into the nighttime sky.
Far enough,
I cried because I couldn’t see it.
Now, I look forward to sleep.
I can dream,
When you were there.
But like love insatiable,
You remain where memories call like haunting winds.

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Beccasommer offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (14 minutes after post)

Wow - whats this about? its deep!!

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Felicity offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (21 minutes after post)

Are you okay?

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~Shie~ offline Verified User (2 years, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 11 #
Gloversville, NY, US | 1 year, 6 months ago (27 minutes after post)

beautiful…

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thep offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 15 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (1 hour, 12 minutes after post)

A lot of sensitive feelings, sadness, loss of something beautiful. The memories and dreams are all that are left.
Did you compose it yourself? Would you like to talk more, about what made you write the post?
Another question. Was it something spiritual or a real life happening that caused it?

A bit about one of your earlier posts that is now closed. The one about “Hashivenu”, did you hear this version :- http://folio.stonington.org/fferrall/…
I think I shouted this musical arrangement to you at the time. :- http://funkyhippy.web1000.com/jewish…. You will have to find the one you want from the list provided.

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♥.smileforme.♥ offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 6 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (1 hour, 16 minutes after post)

thank you thep

and yes I did:]
It’s about my real life experiences

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thep offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 15 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (1 hour, 19 minutes after post)

It is one of those experiences that never quite goes away, by the looks of it. Something that can be a reward in later life, if the memories can be kept to nice memories from the experience.

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fletcher offline Verified User (2 years, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
AU | 1 year, 6 months ago (2 hours, 13 minutes after post)

God I love those last two lines -.-

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Ballinteer, 07, IE | 1 year, 6 months ago (4 hours, 19 minutes after post)

OoooOoOooh I like it!

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Hi_Sai offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (5 hours, 46 minutes after post)

:(

*is sad now*

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Maximina offline Verified User (2 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (6 hours, 3 minutes after post)

Very beauiful. You are a very talented poet. It looks beautiful in both languages, boy I wish I could read spanish. Thank you so much for sharing. Your poem reminds me of times when I have felt like that. It is amazing how wonderful sleep can be!

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Marconius offline Verified User (2 years, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
San Francisco, CA, US | 1 year, 6 months ago (8 hours, 58 minutes after post)

I think the first part was completely spelled wrong. Should check that spellchecker. :D

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SayItsSo offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 13 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (1 day after post)

sounds sad but very probable

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I left offline Verified User (2 years, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 491 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (3 days, 14 hours after post)

I had a bad night or I would say more. I just wanted to let you know I care.

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Soldier 4 you offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (4 weeks after post)

Me gusta el poema. ^_^

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♥♫baby girl♫ offline Verified User (2 years, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (2 months, 2 weeks after post)

triste pero ermoso

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