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Godblessthepeople
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Um, i just wanted your opinion on this poem i wrote:

I can’t go back and change the past
But i can make the future all the better
to live
to love
to help
to heal
I’ll love you forever
always without doubt
Samantha Lynn.

This is for my girlfriend of about 2 months, i love her so much, just give me your opinion.

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Blueyedazzle offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 10 months ago (6 minutes after post)

Supper Sweet!

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The Astro-Man offline Verified User (2 years, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 10 months ago (8 minutes after post)

Lose the period at the end and leave it punctuation-free. Other than that, it’s not half-bad.

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Godblessthepeople offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 10 months ago (9 minutes after post)

Mk thanks =)

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toxicdave offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 10 months ago (8 hours, 35 minutes after post)

kool poem, i’m sure she will like it :)

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Godblessthepeople offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 6 months ago (3 months, 2 weeks after post)

My girlfriend and I are still together and strong at almost 5 months now!!!!

I Love You Samantha Lynn 3 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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