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I like your poetry very much.
I wrote this poem a long time ago. I have felt like giving up many times and, one of those times, I wrote this poem. Hope you like it.

TO DIE FIGHTING
by Jack M. Thunderbird and Andrew Y. Smythee

It’s been an honor,
yea, a privilege,
to move forward
and face
the bitterest enemies
the blood thirsty demons
that have haunted
and hounded
our every single day.
It’s been so glorious
to face the crushing
blows of their sledges
and feel the burning
sting of their swords.
It’s been an honor,
yea, a sacred duty,
to see our blood
spilled on the field
the battlefield
of guts and death,
the battlegrounds
of heaven and earth.
It’s been uplifting
to see our body
so broken and battered,
so bruised and so shattered
in shambles and ruins
yet refusing to quit.
Yea, it’s been a glory
to stay in the story
to fall and get up
to quarrel once more
to strive for the moment
when we realize
that the battle is over
whether won or lost
but no one can say
no one dare say
that we’ve quit while ahead
that we’ve run just afraid,
for instead of the comforts
of home
we sought to remain
in the battle for long
and rather than see
a bitter defeat
or a gracious retreat
we preferred to withstand
the pressures and woes
and we’ve finally come,
after facing our foes,
to victory.

But if not,
if triumph be not ours
then we’ll just die fighting.
Yea, we’ll just die fighting.