Love help: Poem by tricky ” Love”

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Poem by tricky ” Love”

what if i loved you more than words to describe
would it make any difference

what if i told you, you are my all
without u will never be whole

what if i told you ur eyes makes the world stop
will you keep looking at me

what if i said please stay
never go away

what if i want to be with you till the morning light
will you hold my hand

what if i just want to look at you
till my eyes die on me

what if i wish that when i die
i want you to be beside me

so let the water turn into sand
let the sky cry on me

let my face rain on me
i will forver hope that the rainbow

will call me

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Anonymous #
5 months, 2 weeks ago (4 minutes after post)

this is amazing :)

tricky 87 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (7 minutes after post)

well i just wrote it directly on the PC so i dont think it is that good i just felt like writting something , i usally write on a paper , i feel the words more and stuff ^_^ … i think this is ok not bad

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Nirvana Haro 53 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (12 minutes after post)

That’s so sweeeeeeet.
It makes me smile.
=]

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\\\ 91 #
An Undisclosed Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (16 minutes after post)

regardless of where you wrote the poem, it came out really good. it’s definitely more than “ok”…. :)

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Soldier 4 you 4 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (18 minutes after post)

Bravo!

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~Starlight~ 1 #
Beirut, 04, LB | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (39 minutes after post)

:O:O .. speechless .. thats one of my favorite of your poems…
its great amigo =D
keep em comming =)

tricky 87 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (43 minutes after post)

~Starlight~ wrote:
:O:O .. speechless .. thats one of my favorite of your poems…its great amigo =D keep em comming =)

hey amiga ^_^
thanks a lot // watch the a lot ^_^ lol

thanks for all also

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livelaughlove25 0 #
An Undisclosed Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (58 minutes after post)

aww thats cute =)

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GoddessOfTheNight 2 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (1 day, 20 hours after post)

Awww… That’s nice. Write it for anyone in particular? x

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tricky 87 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (1 day, 21 hours after post)

GoddessOfTheNight wrote:
Awww… That’s nice. Write it for anyone in particular? x

what difference does it make ?

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GoddessOfTheNight 2 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (2 days, 14 hours after post)

No difference. It’s still a really sweet poem. I feel like you feel harshly towards me after that row on my post…

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angel♥ 871 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (3 days, 10 hours after post)

awww thats sooo sweet!
i love the line “what if i told you ur eyes makes the world stop will you keep looking at me”
was this inspired by someone?

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tricky 87 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (3 days, 11 hours after post)

angel_devil095 wrote:
awww thats sooo sweet!
i love the line “what if i told you ur eyes makes the world stop will you keep looking at me”
was this inspired by someone?

yeah i guess ^_^

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angel♥ 871 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (3 days, 11 hours after post)

awww! thats so sweet! god.. id love a guy to write something for me! haha

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Anonymous #
2 months ago (3 months, 2 weeks after post)

Ill call you

tricky 87 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months ago (3 months, 2 weeks after post)

Anonymous wrote:
Ill call you

than what ?

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Anonymous #
2 months ago (3 months, 2 weeks after post)

then so we can read and write about each other??

tricky 87 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months ago (3 months, 2 weeks after post)

how can you write about me if you dont know me and the other way around
btw i live in lebanon ^_^

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Anonymous #
1 month, 4 weeks ago (3 months, 2 weeks after post)

thats why we have to talk —- so we can get to know ea other

tricky 87 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 4 weeks ago (3 months, 2 weeks after post)

me giving you my number no way , talking on the internet i could do that…

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