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Master - a poem I wrote about drugs.

I’m your shadow
I’m your friend
I drag you in
Let the beatings begin
Too late to let go
Too late to apologize
I will run through you
I will destroy what’s pure in you
Smashing your purity and pride
Smashing until death you will ride

Drink up, inhale, now I’ve run through you
Nothing more can save me from you

Lie, steal, I’m in control of you
Obey and your life’s in disarray

Pay your price
Feed your fear
The beatings have begun
You’re addicted now
Nothing more can you say
See me, feed me, feeding you
The more you see, the more you need
It’s too late, I’m your Master

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Setto? 5 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (1 minute after post)

5th line from the bottom, your should be you’re

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Master

I’m your shadow
I’m your friend
I drag you in
Let the beatings begin
Too late to let go
Too late to apologize
I will run through you
I will destroy what’s pure in you
Smashing your purity and pride
Smashing until death you will ride

Drink up, inhale, now I’ve run through you
Nothing more can save me from you

Lie, steal, I’m in control of you
Obey and your life’s in disarray

Pay your price
Feed your fear
The beatings have begun
Your addicted now
Nothing more can you say
See me, feed me, feeding you
The more you see, the more you need
It’s too late, I’m your Master

Help me with: I thought to pass this on since the idea is healthy and is inspiring yet sad.

inside_instincts 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (5 minutes after post)

thanks.

Help me with: I thought to pass this on since the idea is healthy and is inspiring yet sad.

\\\ 91 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (5 minutes after post)

it’s powerful

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Setto? 5 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (6 minutes after post)

No problem. I hope this poem doesn’t describe your experiences in life, as it doesn’t sound like much fun. :S

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inside_instincts 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (9 minutes after post)

Everything I write is how I feel about life or my experiences. And no, life for me hasn’t been a whole lot of fun.

Help me with: I thought to pass this on since the idea is healthy and is inspiring yet sad.

Setto? 5 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (13 minutes after post)

I’m sorry to hear that. But keep writing.

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Nightowl 2 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (14 minutes after post)

What drugs?

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Indigo_Rain 13 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (16 minutes after post)

I like it, I like it lots. not so sure about line 10… maybe “smashing until death’s final ride”? its like one syllable too long. But it is very very very good. Although you seem to give up rhyming lol.

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littlenick 131 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (23 minutes after post)

Great poem! I wish people who are addicted would read this.

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Nightowl 2 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (24 minutes after post)

Meth? Crack? Heroin? Opium? What did you do that had such a hold over you?

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littlenick 131 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (25 minutes after post)

I don’t think it matters what kind of drugs have a hold of you. They are all the same. Drugs.

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Nightowl 2 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (30 minutes after post)

littlenick wrote:
They are all the same. Drugs.

If someone has a caffeine addiction, I dont think they’re going to jack someones car to get enough money to get a fix.

Meth>Heroin>Coke>caffeine>sugar>weed

If you try to compare a meth addict to someone who smokes weed, your insane.

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Setto? 5 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (33 minutes after post)

To say all drugs are the same is really a very silly statement. Is Meth the same as Aspirin? Not quite.
Every substance has a very different effect on people. And each substance varies in effect between people too.

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dancefloordestroyer 4 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (1 hour, 53 minutes after post)

Nightowl wrote:

Meth>Heroin>Coke>caffeine>sugar>weed

I’m assuming thats in order from worst to…least worst lol, I completely agree (although I haven’t tried heroin or meth).

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Nightowl 2 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (2 hours, 22 minutes after post)

dancefloordestroyer wrote:

Nightowl wrote:

Meth>Heroin>Coke>caffeine>sugar>weed

I’m assuming thats in order from worst to…least worst lol, I completely agree (although I haven’t tried heroin or meth).

Yes. I’ve heard TERRIBLE things about meth. It steals your friggin soul man.

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inside_instincts 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (7 hours, 28 minutes after post)

You name the drug, I have most likely done it. Just can’t remember it all.

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Felicity 8 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (7 hours, 57 minutes after post)

This is really good and inspirational.I will use it here and share it with a couple family members too.Thank you.

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DJCookieUK 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (13 hours, 29 minutes after post)

its a true reflection. good work. I hope your on the up my friend if not reflect on your own work because it also shows you have a handle on who is really in control when the fight is done.
Smile … the sun shines equally for us all and no one can take that away.
Peace \/

Snar 41 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (14 hours, 37 minutes after post)

ITs a really good piece of poetry :). I like it a lot. THe ryhmings a little awkward in just one or two places but thats overriden by the great description and power. Good work inside, i like it :).

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