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Is something wrong with me?

I wrote this poem.

She sat at the computer,
Staring into space,
The text soaking into her eyes,
Watching the beautiful face.

“She died,” it said.
“At 4:03 last night.
Her mother left some pills,
And walked out of sight.
It is said that she couldn’t take it.
It is said that she couldn’t speak.
But there is one thing that she could do.
And that was..swallow food.”

“So she took the pills,
Dropped to the floor,
Lay there unconciously.
Until her father came home.”

“She had died hours before
Three minutes after four.
It was already seven
She was on her way to heavan,”

A tear streamed down her face,
As she read a little more.
She had to find a name.
She needed to know who it was.
She searched and searched - even looked on the floor!
Until she found out.
That girl was…

Her.

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youlikemine offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 2 months ago (8 minutes after post)

Yes. Something is wrong with you. This is a very serious sign. You should consider talking to someone, anyone, about how you feel… so that someone else doesn’t have to find “HER” on the floor.

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NOLA Lady offline Verified User (2 months) Shouts: 74 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 months ago (15 minutes after post)

Are there any friends are family that you can talk to? That is a very sad poem. Why are you thinking this way? What is going on right now?

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An Undisclosed Location | 2 months ago (29 minutes after post)

Severe depression will make you feel like you are crazy. There is obviously something going on you rlife that you would write down a poem like that. Look at every aspect of you life and try to figure out what thing or things is causing this type of a reaction. Talk to a good friend about your feelings. They can maybe help you define the probem. Once you have identified the problem then try to develop solutions to the problem.

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srnityblu offline Verified User (7 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 15 #
Regina, SK, CA | 2 months ago (2 hours, 46 minutes after post)

wow your poem speaks volumes. Maybe we can help? Do you feel like talking about your pain, or what is making you feel like you are going crazy?

Thank you for reaching out, this is a huge step and this is a start to healing. Keep writing you have a wonderful talent there.

Your friend, Shannon

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Salisbury, MD, US | 2 months ago (1 day, 9 hours after post)

i feel that all those responses could be valid. But expressing yourself is a way of taking deep feeling and getting them out. I think you should write, find a friend to talk to about this. But dont only try to delve into the bad, make it a challenge and see if you can write something powerful.
I have had some friends write stuff similar to this when they had been in dark places. And they kept writing and i kept asking them for more of their writing.

In conclusion it is much better to get it out then keep it all in, the writing is a good thing

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