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One by one they drop like flies
Teach themselves to think like you
If this shall be the truth
Lay me down sir, lay me down

Ill admit it its sinks faster when were in this boat together
Take your hands and break my spirit
If this shall be the truth

Betrayed by they’re merriment
Each sought for one’s redemption
If this shall be the truth
Please speak up sir, please speak up

Forgive me father I never knew in my youth
His bravery was scarcely understood
Stand tall and be my legend
If this shall be the truth

Their minds will render arabesque
And mormon rain will dredge your tenable carapace
If this shall be the truth
Let it rain sir, let it rain

Watching from a distance, a generation bathe in ashes
Soaking in the glory
Soon discovered on my face lamenting
For recourse and reprieve

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Tsherlin invited 12 users to read this post 1 year, 5 months ago.

Help me with: “Assimilation Stole My Friends”
steff offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 174 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (3 minutes after post)

I have to admit…this one is a bit over my head.

???

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1 year, 5 months ago (25 minutes after post)

Ok… i like this

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Tsherlin offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (46 minutes after post)

were you the one that thought i was full of myself?

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steff offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 174 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (15 hours, 56 minutes after post)

Tsherlin wrote:
were you the one that thought i was full of myself?

He’s not full of himself! He’s soooooo nice!!

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Tsherlin offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (19 hours, 6 minutes after post)

:D

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (2 days, 1 hour after post)

i really like this, not 100% sure of the meaning of everything
but the language is beatiful

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steff offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 174 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (2 days, 1 hour after post)

ditto.

travis will you clarify?

or would that ruin it…

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Tsherlin offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (2 days, 2 hours after post)

its not really a concrete poem…i wrote it in a very lucid state of mind so im sure its hard to interperet but its about wisdom…and the hunt there of.

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ThisMoment offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (2 days, 2 hours after post)

and it all makes sense

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Tsherlin offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (2 days, 2 hours after post)

…when i said “lucid state of mind” i didnt mean i was “messed up”

i just meant i was drunk with epiphanys and words

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (2 days, 3 hours after post)

all praise to whatever state of mind your in that flares the power behind your words

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steff offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 174 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (2 days, 3 hours after post)

Tsherlin wrote:
…when i said “lucid state of mind” i didnt mean i was “messed up”

i just meant i was drunk with epiphanys and words

no other way to be, man!

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