poem…
these marks wont go for a long time,
they will remind me of who i am.
time seems to slip away,
is my whole life a sham?
struck down to earth,
how can i love?
when i need to fly away,
on the wings of a dove.
what do people think?
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i like it!!!
its a nice poem :)
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peom…
these marks wont go for a long time,
they will remind me of who i am.
time seems to slip away,
is my whole life a shame?
struck down to earth,
how can i love?
when i need to fly away,
on the wings of a dove.
what do people think?
-Ifrit- edited this post 3 months, 1 week ago. Read the previous text »
poem…
these marks wont go for a long time,
they will remind me of who i am.
time seems to slip away,
is my whole life a shame?
struck down to earth,
how can i love?
when i need to fly away,
on the wings of a dove.
what do people think?
It’s very realistic, a struggle, something many go through. But written very well. :)
my ex, messed me up when she finished me, not intentionally, it was kinda my fault for getting so atttatched
Look at your scars and use them as a memory, a past thats already written. As with these post’s don’t try to add anymore text. I loved the way you question yourself within your poem.=)
i can onl;y write when i get inspiration, which isnt too often
i think ur poem is great :)
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (3 days, 23 hours after post)
ifif i like that last part the best..
it’s an honest poem that’s why i like it..
it’s good you don’t cut. cutting never got anyone anywhere..
i have done though fran, last night, not much because my bestfriend called me to stop me
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (3 days, 23 hours after post)
:S
sorry to hear that. it’s nice you have a freind to count on.
try counting backwards. never worked for me mabe it will for you tho…..
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (3 days, 23 hours after post)
start from 101……
wow, big number, im all good now, it only gets me sometimes, i’ll be fine over the next two days cuz im not gonna be at home
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