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poem…

these marks wont go for a long time,
they will remind me of who i am.
time seems to slip away,
is my whole life a sham?

struck down to earth,
how can i love?
when i need to fly away,
on the wings of a dove.

what do people think?

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-Ifrit- offline Verified User (7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 51 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (1 minute after post)

its meant to say poem obviously lol

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (5 hours, 10 minutes after post)

i like it!!!
its a nice poem :)

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Amber~eyes H.I.L edited this post 3 months, 1 week ago. Read the previous text »

peom…

these marks wont go for a long time,
they will remind me of who i am.
time seems to slip away,
is my whole life a shame?

struck down to earth,
how can i love?
when i need to fly away,
on the wings of a dove.

what do people think?

Amber~eyes H.I.L offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 887 #
Middleton, K1, GB | 3 months, 1 week ago (5 hours, 34 minutes after post)

nice.

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NOLA Lady offline Verified User (3 months, 4 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (6 hours, 21 minutes after post)

Very Good Poem.

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-Ifrit- edited this post 3 months, 1 week ago. Read the previous text »

poem…

these marks wont go for a long time,
they will remind me of who i am.
time seems to slip away,
is my whole life a shame?

struck down to earth,
how can i love?
when i need to fly away,
on the wings of a dove.

what do people think?

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 42 minutes after post)

no one mess with my post

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Amber~eyes H.I.L offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 887 #
Middleton, K1, GB | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 45 minutes after post)

Sorry! I just thought I’d correct the spelling of Poem!

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 46 minutes after post)

it was meant to be sham, not shame

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Amber~eyes H.I.L offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 887 #
Middleton, K1, GB | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 52 minutes after post)

Oh, umm I didn’t do that,

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Amber~eyes H.I.L offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 887 #
Middleton, K1, GB | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 52 minutes after post)

I just checked it said shame before I edited it.

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 53 minutes after post)

did it?

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Amber~eyes H.I.L offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 887 #
Middleton, K1, GB | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 53 minutes after post)

Yeah

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 54 minutes after post)

I like it. Well done. :)

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 54 minutes after post)

yay! sorry amber, my bad! im glad people like it!

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Amber~eyes H.I.L offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 887 #
Middleton, K1, GB | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 55 minutes after post)

:) I do like the poem, and no problem :P

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 55 minutes after post)

what did you like about it?

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 57 minutes after post)

It’s very realistic, a struggle, something many go through. But written very well. :)

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 57 minutes after post)

i write my feelings

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Amber~eyes H.I.L offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 887 #
Middleton, K1, GB | 3 months, 1 week ago (8 hours, 57 minutes after post)

Agree with Aly (nod)

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (9 hours, 5 minutes after post)

It makes me wonder who struck you down.

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (9 hours, 6 minutes after post)

my ex, messed me up when she finished me, not intentionally, it was kinda my fault for getting so atttatched

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (9 hours, 6 minutes after post)

long time ago though

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smoogie. offline Verified User (4 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 113 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (9 hours, 10 minutes after post)

Look at your scars and use them as a memory, a past thats already written. As with these post’s don’t try to add anymore text. I loved the way you question yourself within your poem.=)

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (9 hours, 11 minutes after post)

i have no self inflicted scars as of yet

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (9 hours, 21 minutes after post)

Then use words to cut.

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (9 hours, 23 minutes after post)

i can onl;y write when i get inspiration, which isnt too often

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~Nikki~ offline Verified User (7 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 18 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (9 hours, 39 minutes after post)

i think ur poem is great :)

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (9 hours, 40 minutes after post)

yay

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eu3 offline Verified User (3 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (22 hours, 14 minutes after post)

a nice poem:)

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rosecriesandrebels offline Verified User (4 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 79 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (3 days, 23 hours after post)

ifif i like that last part the best..
it’s an honest poem that’s why i like it..

it’s good you don’t cut. cutting never got anyone anywhere..

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (3 days, 23 hours after post)

i have done though fran, last night, not much because my bestfriend called me to stop me

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An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (3 days, 23 hours after post)

:S

sorry to hear that. it’s nice you have a freind to count on.

try counting backwards. never worked for me mabe it will for you tho…..

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An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (3 days, 23 hours after post)

start from 101……

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (3 days, 23 hours after post)

wow, big number, im all good now, it only gets me sometimes, i’ll be fine over the next two days cuz im not gonna be at home

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