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Eye, Mind, randomness, Drowning, Shadow, Collide, Thought, Freezing, Pool, choice (How Tags Affect Reciprocity)

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Fever Dream offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 17 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (5 minutes after post)

Your such an awesome poet! I’ve always envied people who can write poetry, i just cant do it >, . But that is just awesome! Awesome! I love it.

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shol'vah offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
Anchorage, AK, US | 1 year, 4 months ago (33 minutes after post)

Nice poem, dark but meaningful. Well done.

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Trampy offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (1 hour, 58 minutes after post)

Woo :D well I’m glad some people like it.

Fever Dream wrote:
Your such an awesome poet! I’ve always envied people who can write poetry, i just cant do it >, . But that is just awesome! Awesome! I love it.

And for you fever, seriously that’s my first attempt I didn’t spend to long on it either.

If you’ve got something to express it should come to you, I mean if I can do it and people think it’s ok then sure you can :D.

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Fever Dream offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 17 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (2 hours, 3 minutes after post)

idk =/
whenever i try to write my emotions it just sounds so stupid, its not like i don’t have a big enough vocabulary but i just don’t have the thought process where i can come up with lines of text that Show you how i feel like that, and i envy you for your ability to

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Trampy offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (2 hours, 12 minutes after post)

Well I don’t know how to advise yoou =/ as this is my first one, maybe more will follow.

I did use a thesaurus for a few words :D so I cheated a ickle there.

Maybe try it while drunk? :D good excuse.

Or when you have something stuck in your head that you can’t get out.

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Fever Dream offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 17 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (2 hours, 17 minutes after post)

It’s been awhile since emotions have really got me going, in fact I’m pretty stolid until it comes to women. We’ll see if i start to fancy another girl. maybe ill be a poet after all.

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Trampy offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (2 hours, 24 minutes after post)

Darn women D:. Night night.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (3 weeks, 4 days after post)

Trampus wrote:
One eye, you made blind.
But I still see.

that line is amazing.

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Trampy edited this post 1 year ago. Read the previous text »

Random thingy don’t know what you would want to call it.

Just some things I was thinking about the past

You are the shroud that covers my mind.
You are the nails in my mind.
I was the untainted,
You were my contorting shadow.
I don’t remember.
All I see is the violent sparks of volleys.
The strongest minds,
Drowning in my pool.
Hideous choices for cowering minds.
Take it all away?
Finish it.
Quiet whispers inside the mind,
they collide.
You are my freezing nights,
and early endings.
You tore me apart,
But the seams still held.

One eye, you made blind.
But I still see.

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