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poem wrote in about a minute…

I live inside with jealousy
wishing for attention
I wish to express myself
so others can see me
see what my soul has to say
for which is dying to speak out
but is scared
too scared to speak loudly
I fear making mistakes
threat them exposured
to the outside world
I dream in my surreal world of perfection
lonely in my heart
isolated and lonely
for my words are kept in
silence only continues
then the people just walk away

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Count Nante offline Verified User (2 months, 1 week) Shouts: 807 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 1 week ago (1 minute after post)

Awwwwwwwwwwwww

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 21 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 month, 1 week ago (2 minutes after post)

:) why awww?

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spiritedsoul edited this post 1 month, 1 week ago. Read the previous text »

poem wrote in about a minute…

I live inside with jealousy
wishing for attention
I wish to express myself
so others can see me
see what my soul has to say
for which is dying to speak out
but is scared
too scared to speak loudly
I fear making mistakes
threat them exposured
to the outside world
I dream in my surreal world of perfection
lonely in my heart
isolated and lonely
for my words are kept in
silence only continues
and then the people just walk away

Count Nante offline Verified User (2 months, 1 week) Shouts: 807 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 1 week ago (2 minutes after post)

It was sad :(

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 21 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 month, 1 week ago (3 minutes after post)

yeah, in ways it is
i get lonely because I fear of showing my real self to people.

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littlenick offline Verified User (4 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 218 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 1 week ago (12 minutes after post)

That’s a very sad poem! I’m crying right now! Don’t do that!

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 21 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 month, 1 week ago (13 minutes after post)

aww u donlt have to be sad!

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name with no face offline Verified User (9 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
Warminster, PA, US | 1 month, 1 week ago (23 minutes after post)

i think i’d like it better out of “poem” form and rather as a paragraph in pros… but at least your not bottling things up giving you a malignant tumor in your brain.

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 21 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 month, 1 week ago (25 minutes after post)

well, im not too botered about how its set out. im just letting things out.

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aeolian mode offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 14 #
Rocklin, CA, US | 1 month, 1 week ago (35 minutes after post)

Its great to see your into the soul.. wondering if you read the seat of the soul..From gary ?? Good work, keep it up

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 21 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 month, 1 week ago (45 minutes after post)

whats seat of the soul about?

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aeolian mode offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 14 #
Rocklin, CA, US | 1 month, 1 week ago (51 minutes after post)

well, you might guess its about the need to heal in our liketime and ways of understanding how to understand the soul…very inspiring ..though you might like it

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 21 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 month, 1 week ago (16 hours, 41 minutes after post)

interesting :)
what did u learn from it?

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