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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 year, 4 months ago (1 hour, 8 minutes after post)

write about what you want to write about
ignore anonymous
they are just full of cr**
it is a shame some can;t appreciate what others create.

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sdfjjsdkajdl offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (1 hour, 15 minutes after post)

Overall reading it, I got confused.
Idea wise, average.
Story value with depth, good.

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Hazella offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (2 hours, 26 minutes after post)

Anonymous wrote:
that’s so dumb.
1. what kind of names are stuart and tina?
2. no 30-yr-olds like 18-yr-olds
3. THE WHOLE THING IS RETARDED

1. They’re only names, but i can easilly say what kind of a name is yours
2. You are so wrong and besides it’s fiction!
3. Maybe so, but you sound more retarded

I agree with you spiritedsoul and thanks for you input too sdjjsdkajdl, but why did you find it confusing?

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 year, 4 months ago (2 hours, 35 minutes after post)

if u want chloe u can just report the person who sent that.

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spiritedsoul offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 4 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 year, 4 months ago (2 hours, 36 minutes after post)

actually, i reported it

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unknown! offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (2 hours, 38 minutes after post)

with a few little changes and stuff, i think it could be really good =]
it’s very scandalous! lol

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Is this a good idea for a novel?
Title: Witch’s prince
Rating R
Summary: Stuart meets up with an online girlfriend named Tina Witch, only to find out that she is actually 30, not 18 as she claimed to be. Stuart is infactuated by Tina’s appearance. Despite already having a girlfriend named Jessica.

Stuart is then spoilted by Tina, at the same time she finds out about Jessica she writes threatening letters to her and post lies about her on the net in hope that Jessica will leave him. Jessica remains true to Stuart and tells her that the rumours are false. Stuart has his suspicions but then when he steals Tina’s diary and reads it, he now believes in Jessica.

Stuart dumps Tina and Tina does not take it lightly. Three weeks after Stuart breaks up with Tina, Tina continues to spy on both Jessica and Stuart. She steals the necklace that Stuart gave Jessica and wears it.

At the prom night, Jessica and Stuart go together. Tina spies on them thoughout. She gate crashes the prom and shoots one of the teachers and one of Jessica’s friend’s dead along with her boyfriend. Tina then kidnaps Stuart and takes him back to her house.

When Jessica realises his disapearance, she gets a phone call from Tina explaining that Stuart is there. Jessica runs straight to Tina’s house and when she opens the door, Tina comes along and takes her to her bedroom.

Jessica is horrified to see Stuart in his boxers and handcuffed. She begs Tina to let him go and then Tina explains that her and Stuart’s love is amazing. Jessica reacts by crying her eyes out and explaining how Styart meant the world to him, and how much she would do for him.

Tina sets Stuart free and he and Jessica hug each other tightly. Tina quickly becomes jelous and pulls Jessica away and ties her up and points a gun at Stuart.

Tina tells Stuart she has to choose between her or Jessica. If he chooses Tina, she’ll shoot Jessica and if he chooses Jessica she will be forced to shoot her.

Stuart stands there and burries his head in his hands. His head goes for Jessica but his heart goes for Tina. Despite kissing Tina in front of Jessica, he goes for Jessica, Stuart asks Tina to drop the gun and she does.

Heart broken Tina orders the two go go away and never return.

The day after the prom, Stuart knocks on Tima’s door and see’s Tina in her underwear and cuts all over her body. Stuart asks in a startled manner if she could give Jessica her necklace back and to apoligise to her. She gives the necklace back and orders Stuart to go.

Tina sends Jessica an email the next day apoligising for her actions but it’s too late as Jessica’s mum reports Tina to the police. On the day the police arrive, Tina’s body is found in a pool of blood in the bath tub with her diary on the floor.

Jessica and Stuart attend her funeral and when they look at her bebo page it says that she will love Stuart forever and that he was the reason of her death. After turning the computer off, Stuart gives Jessica her necklace back and an engagement ring.

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