Love help: A New Poem, Tell me what you think

3Hazel

A New Poem, Tell me what you think

Currents are shifting in the air
I look for you
And strangely this time
You are there

The days are flashing past like jewels
strung together in a pattern
I’m looking for the smokey opal
That shows me God is here

Your eyes are flashing through my vision
You met not only my gaze but my soul itself
Soul to soul, voice to voice

Love ones, a new page is turned
New sights to see
New music to hear

And we will meet the future with a smile
A gift from me
To each and every I hold dear

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Since writing this post 3Hazel has helped in 22 other users' posts within the last 4 days. 3Hazel is a verified member, has been around for 6 months and has 163 posts and 1,926 replies to their name.

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poetry, Eye, Soul, music, god, Love, Earth's atmosphere, Day, Opal, Human voice (How Tags Affect Reciprocity)

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Joy♫ 730 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (0 minutes after post)

Omg that is so beautiful. I love it.

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spiritedsoul 37 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (3 minutes after post)

im confused what its meant to mean but it does sound nice

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~IBWHOIB~ 31 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (5 minutes after post)

as it’s poetry it doesn’t really have to mean anything, but i think i get it. Lovely poem 2Hazel! :D *Love & Hugs*

spiritedsoul 37 #
Sandgate, G5, GB | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (6 minutes after post)

so poetries are like song lyrics then

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foreverfreckled 67 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (11 minutes after post)

I love it! That is so good. It shows a lot of feeling.

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~IBWHOIB~ 31 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (13 minutes after post)

spiritedsoul wrote:
so poetries are like song lyrics then

Sure! Why not?! If songs don’t have to make sense to everyone, why should poems? :D

name with no face 2 #
Warminster, PA, US | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (50 minutes after post)

huzzah finally someone who can actually write real poetry… not superbly great poetry (it was alright though), but it was actually poetry and not just rhyming pros or that dribble that reminds me of a bad punk/emo song… the beginning is very strong, the end, not so much… i want to hear more about the days passing by like jewels…

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3Hazel 11 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 hour, 11 minutes after post)

thanks. I appreciate the input a lot.

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