Love help: Ok I want to write A poem for my girlfriend whos away at collage right now and I need honest advice does this sound Good?

sirjeelliot

Ok I want to write A poem for my girlfriend whos away at collage right now and I need honest advice does this sound Good?

My dear sweet my Baby girl
Your so pretty with your lovley curls
With eyes so sweet
and A nose so cute
It makes me realize how lucky I am to have you
Your cute tummy is so soft and warm
with an adorable button in the middle
I just want to kiss it and mabey tickle you a little
Why my dear you are so sweet
I even want to kiss your feet
I long for your hands with fingers so nice
To see you my dear I would pay any price
lips so red and lovley
legs so long and cute
oh I miss you my baby
I just wish I knew what to do
hair so long and face so innocent
I even miss your pretty scent
Face tummy nose breasts feet legs bellybutton hair eyes
I love ever part of you please never leave me for another guy
although I may be far away
Know I think of you every day
I love you and I know you sleep and dream beautifly
But here I sit awake wishing you would come back to see me

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{[The rocker]} 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (5 minutes after post)

yea dude sounds good, thatll make her go awwww

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rphathawa 0 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (7 minutes after post)

It is a very sweet poem but it might make you sound needy. Women want
strong and steady men. They are looking for men to help them, take care
of them and protect them not to turn into a cry baby when they are away
trying to better themselves. Be strong my man, tell her ya love her and you
support her decisions and you will be there through thick and thin. I am sorry
if I am to critical but don’t be a wimp.

sirjeelliot 2 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (9 minutes after post)

S’oky I put it up for just that purpose! thanks!

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Hellacious Haro 6 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (17 minutes after post)

It’s a pretty sweet poem :D
But the rhythm of this poem is a bit random or vary, (or maybe I’m just no good at reading poems?)

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jonathand 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (27 minutes after post)

theres honey droping of it, she’ll love it!

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Starlight 1 #
Halifax, NS, CA | 1 year, 4 months ago (3 hours, 18 minutes after post)

Thats very romantic, she’ll love it.
Good work. =D

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (3 hours, 23 minutes after post)

Thanks so much!

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mar98 7 #
Dracut, MA, US | 1 year, 4 months ago (3 hours, 53 minutes after post)

Actually, to be honest it sounds like you just wrote this about her body.
I’m sorry..it’s still good though.

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mar98 7 #
Dracut, MA, US | 1 year, 4 months ago (3 hours, 54 minutes after post)

Maybe you could add what you like about her on the inside.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 4 months ago (4 hours after post)

thats true too…Thanks!

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An Unknown Location | 12 months ago (4 months, 3 weeks after post)

mar98 wrote:
Maybe you could add what you like about her on the inside.

the insides of you are so wet and pink,
good thing you don’t like onions,
caue your cootch will stink

hahaha

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sexi_lil_d_9 #
An Unknown Location | 11 months, 3 weeks ago (4 months, 3 weeks after post)

this is a really good poem. im a girl my self and i love it. it would make a girl feel special. i love it

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An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 year, 3 months after post)

dude i think it needs a little more work

talk about some of the good timees you guys have had together

and trust me its not al bad

me and my girlfriend live 300 miles apart LITTERALLY !!

stick in there dude

it will all work out in the end .. . . . . somehow

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An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 4 days ago (1 year, 4 months after post)

ok..thats really sweet and nice buh i think dere’s too much of things about her PHYSICAl appearance! she’l think u only love her for her looks!

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