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well i totally did.
and it was slightly amazing

just so you know

no prob

I have to admit I’m very impressed by your writing skills -fourthings-.

You’re welcome. I actually wished it would have kept going. I wanted to find out what happened to “the guy”. To tell you the truth if it was the beginning of a book, I would read it all - and I HATE reading books. lol

I know but to me, the reader, it was “the guy” in the story.
It’s really a great feat to get me interested enough in reading something to make me want to read more instead of me wanting it to hurry up and end. That post you wrote was like a great beginning of a book, it “hooked” me and made me want to find out more about “the guy”. :P

But look at how you explained your thought processes in the post, how you described your surroundings like the fog on the mountains and mentioned “trivial” things like the music the store man was playing, which all made me, the reader, feel more immersed in the story - as if I’m “seeing it” for myself.
You really do have a talent for writing.
I never hand out fake compliments, hell it’s hard enough for me to compliment you so you better take this to heart! :P

Why waste your talents on posts or games? You should try to get published. I don’t mean a whole big book, just short stories at first in writer’s magazines and such.
There’s lots of ways to get published now. Even purely online books/stories. So a whole big book might not be a bad idea for you if it’s online. I know some a$$hole that got himself published, I can ask how he did it and get the info to you. His book SUUUUCKS but he is advertising it all over the web and making fake testimonials for it so it’s selling on Amazon I guess. I forget the details of it all but I can ask if you’re interested in such a thing.
Or maybe I’m way off base on what you want to do with your writing.

No problem. I’ll shout you when I get any info on how he did it. I’ll try to find something out tomorrow. If it slips my mind and you don’t get a shout from me tomorrow, shout me.

Man, that was really good. Some people are meant to do some things, i really think you were meant to write…Keep doing it.

Awesome prose - I realy like it! Not quite stream of consciousness - but very similar.

dude your writing is crazy - it flows and ebbs and swirls and takes me to lands that only I could imagine - and yet it is laced with the sadness that only an old person could know

I second what heylookitsdaniel said - keep it up! maybe send some of it to some body and see if they want to publish you

four, keep writing… maybe this is why your head hurts so much… :)

*big huggles* I feel the same way sometimes and I find that sleep usually helps, and when it doesn’t then I wait for time or space to pass and then I feel better. Is something bothering you that might be causing those feelings? *more huggles*

Hey - fourthings - we should collaborate or something! love your pose….

Sure thing - I’m writing a novella based on 1) the return of the messiah (but realy - realy not!) a bunch of psychological tests carried out on a woman by a US govermnment sponsered programme - a psychic and a lobotomised child….

Interested?

Well - you write increadably well. I could esily see you writing a few chapters from the perspecive of several of the characters…. I realy like your writing.

well,i liked it and you think no different from other ppl four i think it just may be a time in your life where waiting is the hardest thing to deal with all you want is to feel better,and all you need to do is give it time witch nobody likes to do,but sometimes thats what you need,feeling out of place i think can be very normal but you will see that you can slide right back in when the time is right,you a great person four its nice to see you can put your feelings out there and do it soo well…well i hope you feel better,and i hope its soon for i hate waiting and know how it feels!!i wish you the best four :)if im offbase about this post sorry lol!!

Sure thing - wait untill I can sort it out better - but I will send you the first chapter if you like

Or I could set it up as a post

sure thing mate - send me your email and I will email you the first chapter….

anytime four your a great person just keep going,and keep putting your thought’s feeling’s and smiles out there:)

time heals more then you know! and your friends here are always there:)

*BIG HUGS*

Hmm - for some reason your email thing doesn;t wana work - shout me your email and I’ll send over what I have so far

I tend to read that which I am not supposed to… Your beer is getting warm. Hurry your but up and get over here! This is somewhere new… To me anyway. I think I will go down to Karon tomorrow and look for your family… Do they know I am around or that I exists?

don’t worry i looked at it and was like …passss and didn’t read it cuz it was too long…i need cliff notes of what i’m not sposed to read k!!

Hey dude, just got back from Byron Bay. Guess we’ll talk later. *whooooooooosh!*

I agree with Say lol but it looks nice hehe:D

A bottle of good Irish whiskey! Well… That can be kind of pricey. A shot sized bottle?

i’m going to use this for a start of one of my papers this sem soooooo keep it up so i don’t have to do homework….bitchhhhhhhh lol jk but really

Hmm making a book out of this….maybe if it was a homoerotic thriller id buy it Xd haha
but on a serious note, I know about how you feel, ive stayed up days in a row too many times. For me its more like the boundaries between whats real and what is in my mind. Vision gets shakey, inanimate ojjects suddenly start moving, and I feel filled with a hollow energy, where I need to go and do something, but I know I will lose track of it when I do start. Its an odd feeling haha.
Anyways yeah a very….eloquently put post there man ^_^