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A Poem I Wrote When I Was 17

A Bright Smile

Look at my smile mommy
Why is it so different?
Am i still pretty,
With my smile so different?
Now i am grown mommy
My smile is still different
But this time mommy
A friend is looking past
How different my smile is
He says he loves me mommy
And i think he loves me
Just for my smile
Mommy we are getting married
Today is the big day
Are you proud of me mommy?
I love his smile to mommy
Look mommy at my smile
It is still the same
But i am smiling brighter
Because someone looked at my smile

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (8 minutes after post)

This is a good peom. You should read it everytime you feel down.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (3 hours, 21 minutes after post)

It’s seems a bit choppy to me, but I’m out of it! I like it though and I’m glad it ended nicely because I almost thought it was gonna be one of those sad ones… but it’s not! w00t w00t!

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