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Here’s another poem I wrote for her.

This one was written back in November or her 18th birthday. Hope you guys enjoy it, I just want to share it with everyone now since.. well yeah.

Growth

The irreversible nature of time,
Traps us all, holds us captive.
It follows a steady rhyme,
Until the very last chime.

It causes changes that are easy to see,
But sometimes they are more difficult to read.
Cognitive development for some, maybe,
And most, physical maturity.

Time is the cause of everything we know.
From the growth and development of a seed,
Into a flower, just as you grow
From what you were, to who presently you show.

You have changed so much in the past years,
And all of them have attributed to who you are now.
In the past we’ve shared many tears,
But they’ve allowed us to grow together, far or near.

I used to hate time, until I realized it’s what’s bringing us closer.
It seems like forever for when I see you again,
But when we’re together once more, it acts as disposer,
A disposer of us to one another with love to be our composer.

Time produces the opportunity for achievements and awards,
In which many you have acquired, and for all I am proud.
I know that in the future, our company we will never bore,
Because of all the accomplishments that you’ve been moving toward.

I don’t know how more to say it Brittany,
I could go on about all I love you again in a long litany,
Simple to tell how proud of you I am for everything you’ve done.
Time has simply assured to me that you’re the one.

(I was pretty proud of myself to find a word that rhymed with her name lol)

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malori* offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (10 minutes after post)

aww tzu, you have such a way with words. lol(barista[only the male version], profeesional stunt double[for usher of course],pool cleaner)

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (12 minutes after post)

Aww haha thanks mal. Lmao you’re still on that suggestion thing?

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (14 minutes after post)

lol yep. and until you find one that suits you perfect i will keep suggesting.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (15 minutes after post)

wow that is a great piece of work i bet she loved it.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (19 minutes after post)

Lol why thanks mal :P

And thanks musicismysoul, yeah, she did love it. I just wish things wouldn’t have turned out the way they did. Hah, it’s just confusing for her to say that there was no quality behind our relationship when she’d enjoy things like this. I dunno.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (25 minutes after post)

awww, really good Tzu., almost cried again. God, i didnt have that when I turned 18, what the hell.lol. Anyway, I’m sorry this girl couldnt open her eyes to see that you truly are a sweetheart. Just remember, her loss, not yours. Oh, and not to steal any of Mal’s suggestions, but, you know I hear the circus can be fun. lol.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (27 minutes after post)

oh i didn’t even think of the circus. dang. i was thinking of a hairdresser or vineyard…owner.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (32 minutes after post)

Haha thanks you guys. I always wanted to be one of those trapeez artists :P lmao.

I’m glad you liked it Kayla. The whole theme of the poem I just wanted to convey to her was how proud of her I was with everything she ever does and how wonderful of a person she had grown up to be hence the flower comparison. I got her a small diamond ring for her birthday too.. nothing special it was just a small little thing. Geh.. I just wish she wouldn’t have taken this path I know it’s her loss, but still I can’t help but feel that I lost out on something going to be amazing as well.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (9 hours, 7 minutes after post)

awww tzu…thats beautiful

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (9 hours, 58 minutes after post)

This poem is super sweet! I think the first four or five stanzas can apply to you now…I hope you keep writing more poems cause they’re really good….p.s. I was just lookig at your avatar and I decided that it metaphorically symbolizes you “seeing the light” and waking up/moving away from the pain and confusion caused by this Brittney girl…anyway, I’m probably just reall tired again, so I’d just like to compliment you on another amazing poem!

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