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pitseleh
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Today of all days, when the world ends

When the darkness falls and light bends
Music falls silent and, silence with sounds
Of all those trying to be found

Today of all days, when the world ends
When heaven’s ear will no longer bend
Love means little in a world of hate
And much less to the hand of fate

Today of all days, when the world ends
When the poor and the helpless can no longer fend
Warmth, is just a word that has no meaning
And hands need much more than cleaning

Today of all days, when the world ends
When Violence prays and thievery spends
Today of all days, when I look for you
You look at me from heaven’s view

Today of all days, when the world ends
When you look at me through your rose lens
As the end comes near and I start to cry
What will you see with your godly eye?

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brokenandbloodie offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (8 minutes after post)

Beautiful. A fantastic poem. Amazingly written. The best I have heard in a long while. Did you come up with it on your own? It’s absolutely great. I love the feeling of it, the meaning it brings.

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pitseleh offline Verified User (2 years, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Chicago, IL, US | 1 year, 3 months ago (13 minutes after post)

Thank you!
Yeah, it’s all mine.
i’m very glad that you enjoy it.

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brokenandbloodie offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (14 minutes after post)

I take it you write a lot of poetry? This is something that comes with work, and not many people are as good as you.

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Hybrid Theory offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (3 hours, 9 minutes after post)

Broken said it, amazingly writen and beautiful. Is there a special meaning behind it for you, or is it one of those “take it how you want to” kind of poems. It seems pretty deep to me.

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pitseleh offline Verified User (2 years, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Chicago, IL, US | 1 year, 3 months ago (3 hours, 19 minutes after post)

Thank you!
In truth, i don’t write much poetry. I favor stories, but sometimes the urge to write a poem compels me to.
For me it has a meaning. But it is is also, a poem that you are meant to find your own meaning in.

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The Missing Piece offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (14 hours, 5 minutes after post)

Ooh :] Nice.

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Left offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (20 hours, 42 minutes after post)

I see you.

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pitseleh offline Verified User (2 years, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
Chicago, IL, US | 1 year, 3 months ago (1 day, 2 hours after post)

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