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a poem i wrote…

~Muse~

She is as a fire within
beautiful enchanted beckoning-
a lotus blossom bathed in sun light
out of the deep…woodsmen moonless night-
Dawn like a Phoenix
born from a tormented heart-
glimpse of a master piece…
breathe life into my art-
overflowing emotions of what will come
rising yin energy takes hold
and every thing old is new again-
She comes like a child to play
laughing and smiling we run
into a labyrinth for hours we stay-
When I sleep she comes in dreams
When I write she is passion
When I paint she is the rainbow
after a storm-
Some say she is your “muse”
I think she is more amused
with this man…

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franklintaf offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (1 minute after post)

thanks for sharing! I liked it!

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (6 minutes after post)

great poem,thanks

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Middleton, K1, GB | 1 year, 3 months ago (10 minutes after post)

Its amazing hun ! I love it :)

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (24 minutes after post)

About to log out but saw this one and i knew i had to say something.

this is really nice! keep on writing! :)

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beatricegalant offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 9 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (25 minutes after post)

Beautiful poem!

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OK2BU offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 27 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (9 hours, 24 minutes after post)

Thanks everyone! I really appreciate your kind words… I wrote this when I was painting 15 hour days in my studio, large oils- I was on (creative) fire… the [Muse] poem was an attempt to put words to what I was feeling, it was like the paintings were painting themselves.

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