A lost heart, a forgotten soul.
A strong man on the outside,
a forgotten boy beneath.
No one considers he has lied,
Yet he still lies through his teeth.
A lesson to be taught,
The question of existence.
An answer to be thought,
Though he’ll never claim resistence.
Lost in dark confines,
Lost beneath his mind.
He can’t even see the signs,
that always point behind.
He hides behind his eyes,
No one suspects a thing.
On the inside he cries,
beneath his broken wing.
To find long lost love,
with oneself you must start.
He looks inside to find his dove,
but he never finds his heart.
The boy is lost inside,
His happiness has died.
His hope is lost,
and to no cost,
will his evil thoughts reside.
A poem I finished writing about a minute ago, what do you think? I don’t know if it’s very good or not, but I’ll post it anyway. Haha
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