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my last poem to be posted.

Im here,
im there,
how can i be everywhere
but be nowhere

Ive been so far,
but i stand still,
the wind is blowing hard,
This give my bones a chill,

Im at the fork,
what do i do,
where do i go left or right,
Its so hard to choose,

who can i consult,
who ******* cares,
I feel like a gypsie,
and no one wants to buy my wares.

things are in place,
my thoughts are strewn,
im after something,
Im so consumed.

what comes of nothing,
I have to know,
the facts are all here.
does the wind blow?

what if i open my eyes,
im afraid of what ill see,
a night that doesn’t end,
the darkness is taking over me.

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Kat93 offline Verified User (2 years, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
US | 1 year, 3 months ago (15 minutes after post)

That’s really good

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Smily offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (22 minutes after post)

you are an amazing writer, i hope you change your mind about the last poem to be posted. you write so every one can relate, us trying to find our place in the world, right? anywho its wonderful

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Neutra offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 19 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 3 months ago (2 hours, 5 minutes after post)

Pretty good.

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