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I wrote another song.

What’s your opinion on it. It’s a rap-Metal song.

Intro:(Happy Little children singing) Ring around the rosy
Pocket full of posies
Ashes,Ashes
We all fall down.

1st Part of song: People still die
From this disease
But they always
try to conceive.

They wanna live
but there is no cure
instead they give it to you
and now it’s yours.

you don’t even know you have it
until you feel
your skin burning
is this for real?

next thing you know
your sick in bed
feeling like
your almost dead

and then your down
6 feet under
your life is now
gone forever.

now this disease has claimed
another life
Why does this Happen?
THIS ISN”T RIGHT!!!!!!!

It keeps on spreading
Throughout the country
and now i have it
Why can’t they fiX ME!!!

Second part: It keeps on killing
For no reason
as if we were
convicted of treason.

My skin is burning
and the smell stinks
I’m gonna die
like just another freak

(guitar solo)

and now my end has come
but don’t be sad
just remember
i was a friend.

Now they finally found
an end to the disease

now that millions are dead
the rest are FREE!!!

ENDING: (children are happily laughing)

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