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MusicFreakMaria
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heyheyhey…

i havent been on here for a while… wow… but anyways… i remembered i was writting poems on here…. soooo… i decided to start it back up again…

I sit in the park where i dwell,

for this boy i love so well,

he took my heart away from me

now he wants to set me free

i see a girl on his lap

he says things to her he never said to me

i ran home to cry on my bed

not a work to mother was said

father came home late that night

he looked at me from left to right

he saw me hanging from a rope

he took his knife to cut me down

and on my dress a note was found

dig my grave, dig it deep

dig my grave from head to feet

and on the top place a dove

and remember this i died for love

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Devil_on_Earth offline Verified User (4 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 83 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (5 minutes after post)

wow that is amazing, but so sad :(

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MusicFreakMaria offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
Midlothian, VA, US | 3 months ago (5 minutes after post)

yeah i know im a depressing person :D

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Devil_on_Earth offline Verified User (4 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 83 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (7 minutes after post)

you dont sound like a depressing person

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An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (8 minutes after post)

omg… that was very deep.
really well written!! sounded very proffessional! well done!

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Chickens In Deep offline Verified User (4 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 662 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (9 minutes after post)

Sounds kinda, AWESOME, when you get together an band to sing this, can i have a front row ticket?

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MusicFreakMaria offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
Midlothian, VA, US | 3 months ago (10 minutes after post)

thanks… well im not really as depressed as i used to be… soooo yeah… i occationally have my depressing days so… i write when i am… haha i need to get a band…but yeah id give u a front row ticket…

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Chickens In Deep offline Verified User (4 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 662 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (11 minutes after post)

MusicFreakMaria wrote:
thanks… well im not really as depressed as i used to be… soooo yeah… i occationally have my depressing days so… i write when i am… haha i need to get a band…but yeah id give u a front row ticket…

Sweet, i will buy ALL of your merchandise

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.:Hasta Iguana:.^_^ offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
Gilbert, AZ, US | 3 months ago (13 minutes after post)

oh how sad would it be for a dad to have to cut his little girl down from her noose? this poem depresses me U_U

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Devil_on_Earth offline Verified User (4 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 83 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (13 minutes after post)

it would be sad…

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MusicFreakMaria offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
Midlothian, VA, US | 3 months ago (14 minutes after post)

Blam it on my stupid dreams!!!!!!!!!

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Devil_on_Earth offline Verified User (4 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 83 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (19 minutes after post)

yikes
doesnt sound like dreams…nightmares

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MusicFreakMaria offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
Midlothian, VA, US | 3 months ago (19 minutes after post)

ive had worse nightmares…

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Devil_on_Earth offline Verified User (4 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 83 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (22 minutes after post)

i am sorry …

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MusicFreakMaria offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
Midlothian, VA, US | 3 months ago (25 minutes after post)

dont be you get used to it after a while… with my new boyfriend around and being able to call him in the middle of the night when i wake up has helped me incredibly…

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Devil_on_Earth offline Verified User (4 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 83 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (26 minutes after post)

that would help

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Miss Emotional offline Verified User (3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (49 minutes after post)

thats one hit home
good poem, but very sad

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cookies and cream offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Help.com Volunteer Moderator Long Term User Shouts: 63 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (4 hours, 55 minutes after post)

It’s… is it… it’s…
IT’S YOOUUUUU!!!!
HI! HI! hi! hi hi hi hi! *big giant massive huggy wuggles*
I missed you!
I loved the poem too :) Quite sad :( But very beatiful.

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evansent 2008 offline Verified User (8 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 100 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (8 hours, 10 minutes after post)

no one is worth ending your life for lv.

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Hell Boy offline Verified User (3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 42 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (17 hours, 47 minutes after post)

really an enchanting poeam…..
shows ur creativity and thoughts

Take care
Bye

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