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I have to write a paper for rla.

Here’s my paragraph. Please check over it, cause i really wanna do a good job on this. Thanks :)

If you go into a bed store, you would most likely find a ced with a cover over it, a canopy bed. Canopy beds originated in the 1500’s. During that time, people would put a sheet ontop of their beds supported by four posts to keep bugs and other creatures from getting on their beds. Therefore they would be able to keep their beds nice and clean. Doing so would also keep the people cleaner. Nowadays, canopy beds are made the same way. Not as many people have canopy beds because people don’t have to worry about bugs getting on their beds as much. Though, canopy beds are still known about and used by many.

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isshuenew offline Verified User (3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (15 minutes after post)

it seams to leave you hanging like may be its not through.

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fengshuisweetheart offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
Grand Rapids, MI, US | 3 months ago (5 hours, 6 minutes after post)

I am going to be blunt and only focus on the suggestions for editing to save time, sorry! You have a spelling error in the first sentence. You may want to combine a couple of the sentences with subordinating conjunctions. I am not sure therefore is an accurate transition between the use of sheets and keeping the bed clean. Try to reduce the amount of times you repeat canopy beds.

Other transitions seem to work an you o have a unified paragraph here.

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