whaples201 invited 13 users to read this post 3 months ago.
’sup whaples?
Does she have a boyfriend?
Not as of yet, hope i can be hers, but that’s seeming hard, ive tried to get closer to her, but i dunno
How long have you known her?
Not yet, every day i want to, im thinking all day, i just need like 5 mins alone with her to ask, but every time i want 5 mins with her i dont get a second alone.
Why?…a lot of people around?
Well let me tell you about today for example, Long story
So i didnt see her right after school, so me and my friend walk around, talk, then he leaves, i go back to school, and she’s getting out of a club, there are 7 people there she was talking to , not including me, then when they left, me, her, and her friend were left, then another club got out, and like 3 of her friends showed up so i cant get a min, with her alone.
I know Im askin’ a lot but dont you have her number?
btw im doing my algebra 2 homework right now, so wait a bit, and yea, but her phone’s always off or dead
whaples201 wrote:
and yea, but her phone’s always off or dead
Well man, you gonna have to try and chat with her a little, like build up some kind of convo with her to set up the infamous “ask her out”.
Well whenever i start building a conversation with her after school, something screws it up, and i haven’t called her in a bit, so i dunno
Be it the subject of your next convo…just go up to her and say something like “you know I was thinking if…(insert your invitation or “ask out” here)…”
but like in a natural way, as you always speak to her. I assume she feels comfortable around you, so I dont think there will be any resistance.
Well im very open with her, i tell her lots of things im thinking of that i really wouldnt to other girls, but thats the one thing i cant get myself to do, i always want to, but she’ll say something that’ll ruin what im about to say
Do it. Straight up. You cant look nervous even if on the inside you are going wild. Act the confidence out and try it. Shell most likely accept.
Good new Bad new, its 1:15 am and i have to go to sleep, good news i finished my algebra 2, anyway, i want to but that’s just gonna have to lie up to if i can or not, i mean i want to and all i really want is 5 mins alone, and i could do it, but i cant with too many people around
I know its tuff, lets hope you get the chance. Take care.
yet another lovely poem :} your so talented
This poem is amazing… Seriously
your last line should be changed to, with all of the above.
hope you don’t mind I changed it a little..to fit my love(it was easier to make changes when I was thinking about the girl I love.. dunno why), but here is my changes:
She was the perfect woman, in every single way,
She made the sun shine brighter, and all my cares go away.
Big brown eyes, and that long black hair,
Spent all my time with her, but she didn’t care.
When she is around, I can’t help but stare,
At her cute little face, and long black hair.
I want to be with her, every night and day,
Wish she was my girl, and was there to stay.
I love her deeply, but I’m scared too say,
For I fear my love may run away.
All I want, is too hold her hand,
I just wish, I could be her man.
Cause she is the perfect woman, and no one understands,
What I would give up, just to hold her hands.
I would walk with her, no matter where she would go,
We would play around ,and my love would show.
When she’s around, I feel I could fly,
I just wish, That I could be her guy,
For a while I’ve wanted to show that girl, all my love,
Cause she’s the best girl, because of all the above.
that sounds fine,why you changed her hair?how long have you loved this girl&ehy you not made a move.
God i wish i had a guy to write me poetry. but that was very cute i like it.
Kyle_C wrote:
hope you don’t mind I changed it a little..to fit my love(it was easier to make changes when I was thinking about the girl I love.. dunno why), but here is my changes:
She was the perfect woman, in every single way,
She made the sun shine brighter, and all my cares go away.
Big brown eyes, and that long black hair,
Spent all my time with her, but she didn’t care.
When she is around, I can’t help but stare,
At her cute little face, and long black hair.
I want to be with her, every night and day,
Wish she was my girl, and was there to stay.
I love her deeply, but I’m scared too say,
For I fear my love may run away.
All I want, is too hold her hand,
I just wish, I could be her man.
Cause she is the perfect woman, and no one understands,
What I would give up, just to hold her hands.
I would walk with her, no matter where she would go,
We would play around ,and my love would show.
When she’s around, I feel I could fly,
I just wish, That I could be her guy,
For a while I’ve wanted to show that girl, all my love,
Cause she’s the best girl, because of all the above.
Here’s the thing, it’s written for a girl i like, and she’s blonde, so that black hair wont work.
evansent200 wrote:
that sounds fine,why you changed her hair?how long have you loved this girl&ehy you not made a move.
about 9 months now,and because i cant get a chance, all i want is 5 mins with her to ask and i could, but i cant seem to get a second alone
I know just change the hair and eye color.. sorry I adapted it too fit the woman I love. That made it easier for me too add things sorry about that.. I do think its a wonderful poem you have there
ive just watched it,hes a nutcase lol!!!
yes but tune out the lyrics he’s saying and the poem goes with it, so if i could learn to chords, i also made her a song:O
awwwwwwwww sweeeeeeet you raelly need to tell this girl!have you ever thought she could feel the same way?wouldnt that be something :>
I keep trying but as i said i just need like 5 mins with her and i cant get any time alone, so i can’t, and im not gonna tell her in front of people i don’t know what so ever.
why cant you get 5 mins?are you all in a gang or something,dont understand.
Lol no, i hang out with her like every day after school, its just people i dont what so ever know are always hanging with her, and well, thats just weird, so if i can get 5 mins to talk im sure id be fine
why didnt you say,write her a letter leave it in her locker
She dont have a locker, and even if she did i dont know where it is, and quite frankly would have 0 time to put it in, im in high school, not like i can just skip ladedah around school and wont get in trouble, besides, if i can get 5 mins alone with her i have something alot better than a poem to give her, no i wont say what, and its 7:52 am im about to take a shower and ger ready for school, peace, and thanks,
you mean the heart pendant?enjoy your shower :>
well ur love conflict is cute and it happens soo often in high school. well just call her and set a date. do u hav her number. but don’t set that poem away cause that poem could get you a gaurenteed ticket. serously. it nice. you should give it to her.
I really love your poems!!
Hey buddy wats up just checking to see, when are you going to post more poems
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