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Guys, please help me with my Descriptive Writing:

Our lesson is descriptive writing and using vivid sensory details.
I need to describe an object without saying the name so I picked the “television”.
I have to present this in front of the class, but ofcourse, I won’t bring the whole T.V. Set.

Please help!

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Sans offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 50 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (19 minutes after post)

Describe it in simple words. Then try to expand your description with adjectives. If you get stuck, look at a thesaurus, or go to dictionary.com and use the thesaurus tab to find better adjectives.

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Athens, OH, US | 1 year, 2 months ago (2 hours, 4 minutes after post)

Try using every one of your five senses. It’s easy to talk about what a tv looks and sounds like, but how does it feel in your hand? How does it smell?

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