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random thing that came to me

I wrote this down awhile ago while brainstorming, not sure how it came to me though. please tell me what you think cause I was thinking of using it for a book or something.

There are worlds out there long forgotten by mortal man. The most ancient of angels, whose wings scattered the stars and created the solar winds have flung far from memory more galaxies than countable. Then there are worlds like this one…

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (6 minutes after post)

Nice intro, do you have a story to go with it or are you working on it now.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (8 minutes after post)

still thinking up some stuff, kind of leading a little toward the fantasy side.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (14 minutes after post)

Good luck with it, I’ll expect a signed 1st ed. when it comes out ;)

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (15 minutes after post)

lol k. thanks

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (2 hours, 8 minutes after post)

Bexi wrote:
Love it
got me thinking a lot
i think itd make a good intro to a novel or biography or somthing like that
i think that itd be a good idea in a story or somthing
although on a subject…good luck :D

yeah, it’s been sitting around on my computer for a while now because I don’t know where to go with it from there lol

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (2 hours, 17 minutes after post)

yeah, I was thinking of doing a story that points out just how weird reality and our world can be sometimes and using this as the intro.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (2 hours, 28 minutes after post)

not sure where the story’s gonna go, just forming some vague thoughts right now actually. It’s been a while since I’ve actually sat down and wrote something so I’m trying to clear the cobwebs out lol
I have to make a general outline of how my story’s gonna go before I start writing or else I’ll get halfway through and get stuck in the middle and never finish it.

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 2 months ago (2 hours, 42 minutes after post)

yeah, that sounds like a good idea, thanks!

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An Unknown Location | 1 year, 1 month ago (1 month after post)

this is how religions were made a long time ago.

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