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I wrote this down awhile ago while brainstorming, not sure how it came to me though. please tell me what you think cause I was thinking of using it for a book or something.

There are worlds out there long forgotten by mortal man. The most ancient of angels, whose wings scattered the stars and created the solar winds have flung far from memory more galaxies than countable. Then there are worlds like this one…

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An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (6 minutes after post)

Nice intro, do you have a story to go with it or are you working on it now.

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (8 minutes after post)

still thinking up some stuff, kind of leading a little toward the fantasy side.

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An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (14 minutes after post)

Good luck with it, I’ll expect a signed 1st ed. when it comes out ;)

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (15 minutes after post)

lol k. thanks

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (2 hours, 6 minutes after post)

Love it
got me thinking a lot
i think itd make a good intro to a novel or biography or somthing like that
i think that itd be a good idea in a story or somthing
although on a subject…good luck :D

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (2 hours, 8 minutes after post)

Bexi wrote:
Love it
got me thinking a lot
i think itd make a good intro to a novel or biography or somthing like that
i think that itd be a good idea in a story or somthing
although on a subject…good luck :D

yeah, it’s been sitting around on my computer for a while now because I don’t know where to go with it from there lol

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (2 hours, 13 minutes after post)

When i read the sentence it sounds to me as like an intro to a certain word that is never really used but everyone knows it. Kinda like the word in the back of the mind that can just never come into the right conversation so it stays in the back.

I’d use it in a fiction story, but thats mainly what i write anyway but still, use that as an intro then find the right word, and then lead into a character that this word can describe or the life of this character that is can describe. then lead this into the story line. just my idea lol

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (2 hours, 14 minutes after post)

jus an add on
i woudnt say a fiction story
like a made up story on a character but make it like like, like real life situation kind of thing. so fiction real life thing :D

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (2 hours, 17 minutes after post)

yeah, I was thinking of doing a story that points out just how weird reality and our world can be sometimes and using this as the intro.

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (2 hours, 23 minutes after post)

Sounds like a good story. do you have any ideas on like where the story would lead into?
btw good job on brainstorming, i cant brainstorm for crap. lol, i get an idea and i write, if i try and go off it on paper or in my head ill loose it all lol

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (2 hours, 28 minutes after post)

not sure where the story’s gonna go, just forming some vague thoughts right now actually. It’s been a while since I’ve actually sat down and wrote something so I’m trying to clear the cobwebs out lol
I have to make a general outline of how my story’s gonna go before I start writing or else I’ll get halfway through and get stuck in the middle and never finish it.

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (2 hours, 34 minutes after post)

lol
well good luck with the cobwebs in the head lol why not try writting some ideas about te story down, like not really a story but trying to intro and then just shortly exspanding off of it. Once you find a behining draft then start the outline of the story…kinda like trial and error.

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (2 hours, 42 minutes after post)

yeah, that sounds like a good idea, thanks!

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (2 hours, 47 minutes after post)

welcome

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An Unknown Location | 1 month, 3 weeks ago (1 month after post)

this is how religions were made a long time ago.

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